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I agree with making Eri like a sister to him but I don't think he should adopt her. He can empathize and relate to Eri more than any other character but he should also see that he's not the best choice for her seeing as he himself isn't exactly well adjusted. He should want better for her so he'd be the one to suggest she stays under UA's arrangement. But they'll still keep a close relationship though. And about healing All Might, I think he should become capable of it but intentionally be unwilling to heal him. Kata straight up knows he MIGHT end up clashing with Nezu and the other heroes so while he wouldn't preemptively pick them off, I don't see why he'd bother making them stronger either.
No one's disappointed man, take the entire weekend off if you need to. Rest your mind, absolutely destroy your exams (hopefully) and then come back when you can.
That wasn't in the teen wolf canon but you just proved my point. What is, in the teen wolf canon, however is that the more they use/sacrifice to the Nemeton, the more that draws I supernatural. And you've proved my point by giving more reason to their presence than this fic has. But instead we have no reason as for why there are more monsters but no worries, because we "conveniently" have half a dozen super betas to turn to alphas. So these new additions will pose no threat and have no meaning whatsoever.
I agree with you there and I'm not tryna whine, but tell me you don't feel it too? That there's not really any story to the story anymore. That things are just happening to say that they happened.
You're taking this the wrong way man. I love your fic it just feels like you've stopped trying or you've run out of ideas.
Previous comments aside I don't hate this fic. In fact I love all the steps the author took to get here. Scott's actions, growth and inclusion of all the teen characters are cool. But it feels like things are just happening, so there are things to happen. That whole thing with Kate returning, and Gerard joining her, not to mention the amount of times they were even let off in the first place.... Even the random supernatural just show up to be taken down. The alpha pack feels like a 'Oh and they're here' and the Darachs are just surviving to make us feel like there's still some shadow lurking. We haven't even been given a reason as so why there's more than just Jennifer! I just feel that if when Scott first transmigrated, he woke up on top of the Nemeton, it would explain both the increase in supernaturals showing up and why there are multiple Darachs. But no.......shit happens because shit needs to happen. Forget logic, forget plot, forget established character traits, we ball.
We get that Super Alpha Scott has Super Betas but is this really what this fic has come to? Just sum it all in 4 lines? At this point might as well speedblitz the other seasons in the same school year.
I didn't care enough to comment before but this is all really tiring now. First the introduction of random hobos ONLY for the purpose of making them all alphas. Now it's making every other character an idiot just to make things oh so convenient for Scott and his pack, and this has been happening for a while now. Like cmon, really? Rushes into an entire pack of about 10 werewolves alone? First Kate, then Chris, then Gerard, now all of Deucalion's pack. This is honestly losing all of the interest the beginning chapters built.
I love Toriko. Hella under-rated anime in my opinion.
Oh wow just F Stiles right? 😂 Choosing the mother I law over the homie is madness.