Man I can't tell you how much joy each of these chapters bring me 😂 I look forward to your updates tremendously. Keep up the great work 👍🏼

Between this and VR I'm starting worry about my taste in novels 😂😭

I want this so badly 😂

Once the story is good, there is smut, and it's anything like this.......we good.

'Having heart problems' or 'Matters of the heart'

What's confusing about it?

Okay now I really like the direction this is going 😂 Author is cooking up something good

The lower release schedule does suck but I'd much prefer if you focused on quality. At this point I trust the process enough to stay patient and see what you cook up for us 😂

It really doesn't....

Way too late to comment on it now but it's exactly because of his inexperience why a skill like this comes off as just cringe. Willpower is shaped through experiences and conviction, and yeah he doesn't wanna die but if that was all you needed then everyone would have conquerors haki. Mc is way too green and inexperienced for a scene like this to make sense just yet.

Bs because cqc is part of basic training. Hell it never actually stops even in the normal military, just learning more advanced fighting forms. Therefore Jack was pointless

You try being a stepfather to 3 kids that aren't yours but still managing to raise them with love and bo discrimination. Yeah that's not an excuse to cheat but he's done a lot better than a lot of real life stepfathers

sexist would be the correct term seeing as I'm sure there are black girls in the hunters 😂

I mean we the readers know different but to them Cecilia ain't wrong

I get that this is to get him into the little events around camp but no way would they let the BLIND 5 year old be one of their LIMITED participants 😂 The campers x hunters rivalry is legendary so no way would this have happened

Nah bro. I distinctly remember both Percy, Grover and Nico referring to her as Lady Artemis and her not showing the slightest interest in correcting them.

Keeping with the whole Egyptian theme, what if Anibis asks him to deal with the Nogitsune. 1) It's a spirit who's creation involves death (his domain) 2) It was powerful (crafty) enough to warrent a season and to be the big bad of the movie 3) Seeing him as beyond something the average supernatural could handle, he enlists the mc (a pseudo god) to beat him on the condition that he brings him back to life. The downside is he loses his godhood but retains his Alpha spark. Only thing I haven't worked out yet is why Anubis (an Egyptian god) would be the one to take action and not a Japanese god but I figured if you liked the idea you'd find a way

Happy to hear that abt the new fic. Teen Wolf is one of my favorite series to read about so I'm looking forward to it. And that would've been interesting to see between him and Cora. Even more would've liked to see Erica's reaction to that 😂 While I do have small issues with the ending, I agree that it was a good place to end. His revenge story really did feel complete. On a side note though, your fic kinda lingered about in my head for a bit and I actually thought of a plausible reason that would've kept him around.

Great to have you back man and great chapter as usual

Amazing work author. Solid 9.9/10 and u only missed out on that .1 because of the false romance tag. Like seriously, I was looking at everybody as a possible pairing right up till chapter 70 😂 But this was great. Just wondering but who would you have chosen for Marco?