Debojit_Debnath

Trash. It is like a shopkeeper lures you into his shop telling you about all the wondrous things but when you step into the shop, you are served some dog shit. The complete reversal of things and the expectations you had makes your blood boil, your brain cells scream with agony and your heart burn with fury. Those who write these novels should be charged for cell death and brain damage it inflicts on its readers. It is a poisonous concoction of disappointment, expectations, love but mostly hate and hatred.

You lost me here.. too much focus on friends.. pushing everything from money to spoiling them to sharing books to even letting them on his secrets and how powerful he is. Overly concerned about elfs. And things which can be done without reavealing any secret was done in such a dramatic way without any worry.

Sure. I hope you keep getting better. Suggestion- Having details on something non mc related is good. Using few chapters to expand the readers view or just introducing new things instead of the regular plot works well. But you have to keep in mind that we have come to read about the mc, so spending chapters upon chapters on describing something can backfire. Unless it is really interesting. I ll try to read again..hope it will be better

Wow.. the author is taking the criticism very nicely..... And don't mind the harshness. I know where it is coming from... Cause when I read a book i imagine myself as the mc, so it gets tough if the author keeps tossing around the mc. Although I haven't read the book , I always check the reviews before reading. See, any one with a decent head won't tell anyone that they are an alien( not using reincarnator cause not specified) just because they thought that it is a good way to start a conversation. Some secrets are meant to be kept or just there is no need to mention it at all. And people like characters who improves themselves and have a character development in any possible ways in accordance to the world they are put in.

U people want to argue, then argue.. but don't bring racism and ur narrow minded thoughts into any verbal war. First let me ask, by commenting something really mean would you be happy to know that someone that u hardly know is probably upset because of something you said.. be a positive influence on this world.. or just don't do anything at all.. but never be so mean to someone that they may lose their self confidence. I don't understand why u have to be so mean.. there is so much hate in this world, a little love and tolerance doesn't hurt anyone..

The story was good the first few chapters but it degraded to something unreadable in the recent chapters.. some chapters were just too much info dump and the essay like writing made it unbearable read. Had to skip them with just a look

The story was good the first few chapters but it degraded to something unreadable in the recent chapters.

These few chapters i just had a quick look and skipped it. Kinda getting bored with the same things going on and on.. I think you should use a better way to write cause these few chapters it felt like I am reading essay.

Yes the f**k yuri.. any problem? People don't put tags like #starightromance is included so it is completely okay to not provide #gaycouple notice and have some semi story which includes the above. And if u r going to say that not all people like non-straight things, then remember we don't complain and stop reading a book just because it mentions a straight romance.

U doing okay?