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"" Is what most books and professional writing styles use. Its alot more expressive and familiar and someone whos used to reading standard dialogue won't enjoy -- at all.

It's fine I guess. It's not great but it was alright until the Author changed the dialogue from "Hello" to -- Hello -- At that point just put it on wattpad.

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Idc about the authority, that wasn't my main point at all.

Author ruined it. It was going so well until Sumeru, Takami and Buer basically made a marriage contract since Buer held 20% of Teyvats authority. It was going down the route of Nahida becoming their daughter but nope. Not at all. Because they are the like same person, they get treated the same, aka becoming his wife which is even worse since Nahida calls Buer her Mom.

300,000*

this makes no sense. You give him a supernatural reactor to learn different magics yet he can teach it to anyone without issues? its terrible.

bro turned into Momonga