While the concept is solid, the story itself needs a lot of work. It's something of a Wattpad quality, which should tell more than a thousand words.

The story itself is a bit of a power trip for the mc, but otherwise it's good. I'm confused though about what happened to the sword he found bank in helgen, the one he commentsed that probably was from mara...

I'm at chapter 138 and it's so cringe iI actually got a cramp in my face... This story is nice, maybe a bit too much repeating the same thing or too much forced descriptions. The 18+ scenes though .. sheesh. It's my opinion, but they aren't that needed. I'll just skip the PLOT and get back to the actual plot.

This story is actually enjoyable. A bit of wish fulfillment but not overly tacky with a million unused powers.

This story is surprisingly good.

I just would like to point out that they are at this point around what... 8 years old? it's so jarring for them to have conversations like that... when I was 8 years old I played with sticks and mud, climbed trees and didn't give a duck about any differences between the two genders... Here they have already drama and love problems? it's just so strange.