Diamond_Air
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Diamond_Air3 years agoComentado porXD Nice chap! I'm curious as to what the antagonist's actions would bring! Also there's just a tiny problem with the tenses and punctuations. It seems to switch between past and present. If it's past, it should remain that way throughout and vice versa. I'm sure you can make it better so keep it up XD. Was a nice read.
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- Diamond_Air4 years agoPublicado por
Might be a bit too early for a detailed review buh meh XD. I can do that later on! Right now, all I wanna say is I l o v e every piece of this novel. Never read any goblin-related book so this is my first ^^ Narration is great and the grammar is spot on. Keep it up author! You're doing good!
- Diamond_Air4 years agorespondió a SmasherOWords
- Diamond_Air4 years agorespondió a kuhaku_sora
Thanks for the review XD
- Diamond_Air4 years agorespondió a SmasherOWords
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