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Nero_Okita2 months agorespondió a Nero_Okita*an idiot
- Nero_Okita2 months agoComentado por
Is author sure that luo xia, is a cultivator ? And the MC is a idiot
- Nero_Okita2 months agorespondió a TheGodlyFateFox
Grammar is inconsistent, wrong words , math is inconsistent, MC personality not explained, no background, system not explained properly.
- Nero_Okita2 months agorespondió a Piemasterjelly
yeah this novel changes some basic knowledge
- Nero_Okita2 months agoComentado por
Damn even the effects of luck potion Got changed.
- Nero_Okita2 months agoComentado por
author has a bad habit of skipping on cliffhanger
- Nero_Okita4 months agoComentado por
I thought sword mastery is easier than spear mastery
- Nero_Okita5 months agorespondió a Catlove12Fish
That's not a minor flaw. Thank is his main Talent name that just changed out of nowhere. It kills stories.
- Nero_Okita6 months agoComentado por
I feel like we skipped something in the chapter. Teacher said he will teach martial art in one paragraph and in next MC is demonstrating the said martial art.
- Nero_Okita6 months agorespondió a Kutley
But at the same time by letting them go, he is allowing them to kill others. As in their intro, it is mentioned that they have been doing this for a long time. It leaves a lot to desire.