Internet_Persona

This story is truly great. The only issue i have is that the world building isn't completely fleshed out yet. It does however show a lot of potential. The only real problem i have is that the MC's character isn't that good in the beginning. This however turned into great character development. If you are planning on dropping this due to the MC's actions and thoughts try to read until Chapter 20 as it is a major turning point for the character.

No big issues with the grammatical side. The biggest demerit is the very slow update speed. However the length of each chapter makes up for this. Great Story.