Victor_Weismann

I haven't had time to read anything lately. I spend half my day focused on my novel, but every time I go to sleep, I read a little. I'm really focused on my novel, I want to breathe and sleep with it. Due to personal problems, I've barely had time to focus on my novel that I love writing so much.

I agree, useless details that I talk about are for example, Clare and her brothers conquered those planets with the hive mind, everyone knows that this will happen because the battle was already completely over, therefore, I can leave this 'off' the screen, things like a soldier captured x person, etc. I only show what is relevant to the plot.

Jesus Christ, the amount of information I have about the development of the empire already exceeds 60 thousand words, spread across several documents, and look, I'm cutting out a lot of details and only showing the relevant ones, I really have a new respect for authors who can make the construction of a kingdom the main focus of a novel, I don't have that ability, but I'm doing my best.

The fact that there is no Tsubaki or Hephaestus who is one of the best girls in Damanchi really saddens me, the future from here on is bleak. None of the other girls on the list besides Ryu and Riveria are decent, you have to take into consideration that he is from a long-lived race, so dating normal humans is just waiting for tragedy.

Okay, that's it. Bra becoming something Gohan should do, you increasing Bra's potential because yes, MC wasting his future knowledge because yes, just to keep him weak. Let's be honest, if a transmigator were to go to Dragon Ball, he would abuse the Dragon Balls as much as possible to gain the maximum possible benefit, he would abuse the Hyperbolic Chamber, he would go after the Divine Water, he would go after the Senzu, he would try to get stronger as fast as possible because he knows what kind of world this is, especially if he transmigates in the Dragon Ball Z saga that has Buu.

I don't know, I just think this is a mistake, Goten had opportunities to train in the hyperbolic chamber, but he didn't do it because of Trunks? Really? If it was a Goten without future knowledge, I would even understand, but for a transmigrator? The fact that he didn't take the chance to train more even knowing the future because of Trunks is just a weak excuse to keep him weak.

... Okay.

Just a little warning, I'm not coming here to read the comments, because I'm completely focused on developing the empire, I never thought developing this would be so difficult, I'm doing my best to make everything balanced for the readers, the balance between the conquest of the troops, moments of fighting, and moments with the MC's family, I spent the last 8 hours just writing about the Empire, and this isn't even a chapter, the document already has more than 10 thousand words. Remember that Victor is an Emperor, and the Emperor doesn't go to the battlefield unless it's extremely necessary.

discord . gg / victorweismann try this one, honestly the discord link is working normal, about the update, I will update soon, because I car crash I have, this month was terrible.

Aprove!