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Your writing is exceptional good and well groomed. I like your story and the way your background is set. Good work on the book and i hope it goes far.

Your writing is exceptional well groomed.

At first i thought you los me but it slowly got more interesting. Necromacy is a hard topic to cover if you don't have the knowledge about it. You book is a definite recommend.[img=recommend]

First of all this book is interesting. I like it very much. The strong female lead is one of the things that attracted me to the book. Your grammar is also good

The story is intriguing and you are quite the master of word play. I appreciate how you have quite the depth of description and understanding of the world you created.

They let weaklings use them - not used. Change that please.

There are no creatures more wicked than humans. Truly we are a havoc to deal with.

A wise decision to side track the idea. Clever creature they are.

Although most authors and educationally advanced ones ,might understand the paragraph, other who don't have this qualifications can not understand it. A book should be in an intermediate level to allow readers to follow through.