abyss_of_darkness

he has a real chance to become a god , have a chance at immortal life , countless man would give everything just for them to only have a "chance" to ethernal life , but here mc is just another tom , dick and harry.

why does every mc have to be a swinging dick , just thinking about girls and how to fuck them , the world there is so interesting a new energy in environment and bloodline powers so much to understand and know about the world and also there is power of dimentions and space but all these mc's are like barbarian who looks looks like dont have studied in modern times and just want to swing their dick here and there Dissapointment. pathetic !!

just let mc know that they can see his diary then it will be more interesting

u do know goku can shatter dimensions with his power up alone

i dont know what to say MC is definetely gay or something , who the fuck wishes to be a female to help her get the man , why dont u wish to be man then just chase the girl , too much fuch up, does MC really think that ashborn cant see his soul or memory or he believes he can fool anyone with his acting , I dont think anyone who is not a master actor can pull this off .

wtf wtf is this

Same problem as other trash novels good powers but not a good brain to control the power ., foolish mc ...........................................

so magnetism cant save his friends from iron bullet , why doesn't he die if he cant even do that with magnetos power with years of time in war

What success he is trying to showoff , every mc is just made from system without it u r trash and still u think about pride and showing off

Don;t know where to start author just assume everything , no consistency of thought , no character of mc , rapid narration change. ..........