Gerez

Thanks.

It could be Percy Jackson.

Why Hercules?

Make a crossover. It needs to have zombies and maybe demons.

I forgot to ask: are you going to make a romance?

You could make a crossover world. Also, if he goes to MCU, don’t focus just on Thanos, theres a whole universe to explore.

I mean, I don’t really think that he would have all of that power, but would have some. “Envoy” is basically the personificiation of a being, using someone as a “connection” to do their things. He could basically befriend “Death” and work with her as a job.

“Phoenix” is the only one from those cosmic entities that choses a “host” to do her work and an “envoy” is almost the same. A champion fights for their leaders, but an “envoy” can be temporarily possesed by her and have her full (or almost full) power. I also don’t see him as the champion of “Death”. He is between life and death, but still has life, so I don’t believe he should be her “champion”.

Thanks for the chapter. You could watch the “ghostbusters” movies to get more ideas and inspiration. About the “ectoplasm problem” you could make Damien use his mental abilities and the Ghost Zone to organize his mind and do a command that automatically make his subconcious destroy the ectoplasm that goes off him. Also, when Damien claims the Ghost Zone, remember that people could use the energy of his dimension if they use magic or have powers about energy, so that he can block or permite their use. That way, he would not be unaware or you could just make it that they are unable to use his dimension, even if he isn’t denying them.

Also, I have a solution for the “nullified or stealed powers”. You could just say that his reincarnated soul fused with his new body and because of that, he can use his ghost powers even in the human form and make things that only living beings can do, for example: eat and breath. That way, the only he will lost or get stolen is his connection with the Ghost Zone, but still have his ghost powers. You could even say that he will only be capable of using the Ghost Zone whitout his X-Gene, when he claims the dimension as his own, by becoming the Ghost King or something.