The pace is good,the story is gripping and the writing is quite nice. I just hope this doesn't end up getting dropped like the other attack on titan fanfics

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Nice story. The writing is pretty good and the story seems to be comming along well. Keep up the good work. I would appreciate it if the updates are more frequent

I like the beginning. I am looking forward for a antihero. Just don't make him like Izuku. Also maybe he can get the speedforce using the the formula.

Wanda , Jean Grey, Storm

I just think that him acting like a complete brat and everyone just accepts it to be rubbish. Going around giving powers like that is foolish and should never be done. Logan is still loyal to the professor and a simple button press doesn't change it. Also I would like to remind the author that darkside is not all powerful and has been defeated many times.

Rayleigh

Bard

It is a great fanfic. Language is good. Story is great. The only complaint I have is that you skipped the training stage and directly made him op. I didn't get to see him recruit his crew. How he trained Haki and so on. Although you are trying to do this using flashbacks it just doesn't get the same hype.

Great story. Good writing. I just hope you don't drop it. I like it that you didn't make him too op.Also please keep up the regular updates.

I disagree ,Joffrey was a full blown lunatic. He killed everyone he didn't like. Edward on the other hand does everything with a purpose. Nothing is wrong with taking care of themselves and their children.Especially in the world of GOT.We all saw what happened to the starks for being honourable.

Yes but Tywin didn't takes side in the rebellion more than he did in the series. It only helped Tywin to increase his soldiers .

Saving Lyanna probably will **** up this story. Then he would have to deal with a women who deeply cares for Jon and he would need to intervene for Jon's benefit. He can't just kill Jon since he is a vital part of the plot. And if being raised by Lyanna gives Jon ambition the story would change in a way I don't prefer since mc is not Jon .

Thanks for the chapter. I liked the last parts when Rheagar hears the news. It was epic.

Hey thanks for the chapter but I have to ask what did he gain by telling Tywin what he knew. I can't remember any

I have to say that this book exceed my expectations. When I read that he accepted rhea as his mother I was ready to drop it. But from that pint on the character development unbelievable,how he made mistakes and how he learnt from them.It is a great read. I hope you don't drop it.

Pls update Pls update Pls update Pls update Pls update Pls update Pls update Pls update Pls update Pls update Pls update Pls update Pls update

I really like your story.It is my personal belief that your fanfic has great potential and I really enjoyed it because it has all that I would want in such a story. The mc is strong and independent, it isn't the save the world bullshit, the mc has ambition rather than going with the flow and I really love the will to leave a legacy behind.

Thanks for the chapter.

Don't drop pls. I find grey mcs in GOT very enjoyable. Also pls don't be overly attached to the starks. I hate stories where mc does things for the starks