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Sean_Atkinson5 months agorespondió a WardanJAmes already turned him down for reproduction.
- Sean_Atkinsona year agorespondió a drumSNIPER
Correction: She was not aware it was Richard or a clone, just somebody who claimed to be able to bring him back.
- Sean_Atkinsona year agorespondió a Myst_Assist
Sam should not have opened the door. Otherwise, he would not have been able to enter.
- Sean_Atkinsona year agoComentado por
I wonder if there is an explanation on how they managed to get the timeline extended to this point. It's what 1 to 1.5 years at this point.
- Sean_Atkinsona year agorespondió a Kaiten_The_Damned
It may have to do with the translation. Other novels I've read have a tendency to always mix up he/she, him/her.
- Sean_Atkinsona year agorespondió a Machivelli
It is Gryffindor as he was the one who cursed Orrin.Didn't kill him but he got revenge
- Sean_Atkinson2 years agoComentado por
end repeated portion, even if some of it was reworded it was all the same discussion.
- Sean_Atkinson2 years agoComentado por
start repeated past of story.author I feel like you forgot this portion since this was originally why he was going to the capital, then you changed it to the university aspect.
- Sean_Atkinson2 years agoComentado por
This was a pointless paragraph. the % explored could have been added to the previous paragraph
- Sean_Atkinson2 years agoComentado por
author forgot