YoeyH

What?! If someone makes a Survivor feel bad that person is awfull And if anyone takes it out on a Family member that still makes awful. Again this is not on the Victim at all.

first of All I have written my own stories with Characters that make sense with. That's why I am critical because I ama writer. Secondly anyone who would act so childish I wouldn't want to be friends with And Thirdly: The same way you came to express your Opinion. I have the exact freedom to express Mine. Gotroll Some one else

Ugh I'm honestly upset this has happened. Like This Just feels So incredibly wrong,

I truly loved this story. However I am a bit dissapointed in some of the plot holes in this second installment. In the first Series they made it Seem as though her Nlwe powers would play such a huge part in saving Zhi and in the end She used it only Once purposely; then the Clause of the player albeit a minor detail was Never explained either. 10/10 for the Romance of this story though

Parker flung his behind😂😂😂

This is all so incredibly messy All because BQQ wanted to ect hot food outside on the ground while it's snowing. like Author I've been rocking w/ you this long but honestly make it make sense...

The story has great potential but the pacing of the story feels really rushed. Reading the story in - the beginning using apostrophe's to differentiate but the dialog between the FL and the inner voice would be very helpful. Slowing down the Pacing and giving more backround details about the immediate setting of the FL would also aid in the Story telling. overall I feel the Story has great bones bust a bit of Clean cup as it comes to syntax, background development, missing words/typos.

The Previous Chapter is double up right here.

Wait... Lex Luther is SuperMan Charles Xavieris X-Men... or was this suppose to be sarcasm?

because this wasn't cringey at all....