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the grammar is good but the speech seems awkward if she's vulgar she should speak informally like "bro" or saying "don't go falling for your sis now, you creep". Could be a minor imprivement imo but the story seems nice. [img=recommend]
i did a bit of napkin math and if the experience curve maintains iits exponential increase based on level differential he only need to kill someone about 9 levels higher to get to level 100. With a max skilled ability as long as he doesn't face some lightning resistant it shouldn't be too hard unless the hp growth is also exponential which based on the current scaling shouldnt be too hard.
but wouldnt supremely poeerful individuals offset the avarege? or is it the median of a given species which would not be offset as much by the inflated stats of individuals since there should only be a few.
do you mean physique?
why does she say "masta" constantly i mean even a little girl can say master i don't know why but it really peeves me. am i the obly one?
Hey man i haven't started reading the novel but you should work on your grammar in your own reviews because the first paragraph seems well written (all I've read so far) but your reviews give the impression that you can barely write properly. Hope the comment helps! I'll give a real review after reading a couple of chapters.
Evolving them with the intention of creating followers gives them a base 'loyalty' he needs to expand it through helping them develop or other means to gain true faith. His main goal right now can be considered creating a civilization and helping them do so and expanding their world view as he increases their reasoning and potential along with his great power makes them see him as their deity.
brainwashing for sure as for the instant romance not really. i wouldnt want such a stale relationship in my novel she sees him as a divine being thus cant fathom any romance between the two atm. He needs to build a relationship and make her see herself as his companion not a servant and this takes time.and effort even more when he gets so easily immersed in his projects and using his powers.
He doesn't really hide his power. He just can't go full on fight the other god at the moment since they have the support they have. The other gods are just as powerful as he is but they have a millions of followers so it would make it difficult for him to face them head on. Not to mention they are many and he is an equal in a one on one. He first shows his power on chapter 6 by cursing a race if you read that far. Now onto the true power comment. Two people with great power fight the one who has ants distracting him will most likely lose. Either way I hope you give my novel a chance since I feel like it is a pretty fun read, but if you don't enjoy this type of novel then that's cool too. We all have stuff we like and dislike.
Thanks for the review. I guess the real action will start off side stories detailing the effects many of the changes his experimenting and evolving creates. So if you want that exiting action it's coming chapter 9+ these first chapter are setting up many of the creatures you'll see later on. I do hope you keep reading!