joe_caa

The chinese author lacks knowledge of the naruto world and is continuously making mistakes after mistakes in the story. He continues to butcher when and how certain events are supposed to go and It couldn't be explained by saying that the world is an Alternate Universe or by the butterflies in the story. For ex. Kakashi at age of 5 somehow knew how to perform lightning cutter even though he hasn't graduated the academy yet. He only got this jutsu after learning chidori at the age of 12, chidori is a derivative of Minato's rasengan where kakashi tried infusing lightning chakra to the rasengan.

How???????? When did kakashi learn lightning cutter??? At that age? He hasn't interacted with minato yet. He developed that jutsu after learning the rasengan from minato. WTF?????

Its a typical chinese power fantasy fic. Being a wishfulfilment type of story isn't bad per se but the execution is really bad and incredibly bland. The MC is unlikeable, he went from being "I want to protect those close to me" to "I will become God". He's a megalomaniac and a psychopath. Also everyone in the world is incompetent and needs the mc to solve their problems. The mc looks competent because the author decided to make everyone else dumb as a sack of bricks. The amount bashing in this fic is quite unreasonable and the portrayal of many characters feels wrong or a complete opposite of what they are in the og naruto

Pretty shit ngl ................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................

That's not war, that's called being a power hungry idiot. Many of his actions were a detriment to konoha and he knew it. He tries very hard to justify his actions by saying that its for the village but at the end of the day everyone can see that it's just for his own benefit.

Most of the problems that konoha faced where somehow related towards Danzo. He may have good intentions for konoha but sometimes the road to hell is paved with good intentions.

Change it, its too long and tbh its sounds shit

The story feels super weird. too much like A.I........... ..................... ........................... ................... ........................................... ..................

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That's the dumbest excuse I've ever heard. Make a better story or better yet give up on wrting cause you are garbage