damian_taminua

Nice so we have the template for the team going forward. Still excited to know what happens in the playoffs and then during the offseason with the 2016 draft. When do you hink you will be continuing to update this novel? I appreciate it.

No chapter yet? dont really know what to say except the title way too long.

A nice book . Writing is good and characters are interesting although the names are a bit weird its an interesting story.

good novel with compelling characters at least for the first 20 chapters. lets hope it conzinues

Nice concept. I have seen brother and uncle of the bf but Father is new. Grammar needs to get better but overall not bad.

Nice novel. Short and to the point but still entertaining

A good beginning but only 13 chapters for free is kind of annoying.

I like the concept but there are many novels following the same path. Lets see if this one can stick out from the rest.

A very good start. Only 11 chapters for niw buz lets keep it up.

A very well written novel. Only 9 chapters so far but a good start.