Merle8888

Lv2

2019-10-20 Se unióGlobal

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Merle88883 years ago
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I've decided to write a review today after I read the anticipated chapter of the story, the kiss scene. I must say the author did a great job in building the world, arranging every part nicely. Keep going.
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Merle88883 years ago
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The moment!
Though she came to him bravely, she couldn't bring herself to kiss him properly, barely touching his lips, she held it for a mere 3 seconds and loosened herself away from him, while the protagonist stood erect in his position all the while, unable to decipher what just happened.
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Merle88883 years ago
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She is sweet.
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Fantasía · trumpet_creeper01