Spellbound_Jac

good keep it up

I like the story continue it

alright bro

I like the mix of Emma and Shaw it's fun but dangerous. I want to see how this progresses. something u ha w to say, though, is don't. have Peter get Emma, it would make sense for her and shaw to stay together.

I like it. it's simple but good the grammar is bad, but the story is decent

The main problem I have with his story is that the mc is to forgiving allowing the Cullen to step all over him its fucking irritating so I have elected to drop it

author wants a review and currently this is good shit I recommend you read it

I'm fine with this

thanks

really in an hour come on he's not incompetent or overly fat