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Kinda fast paste but love it.

The concept and the execution so far is 👌👌⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

I can’t find your page On patreon I can’t find thelightedghost it directs me to kashyap

I like the premise but it feels very much like it’s written by A.I. Which I don’t mind as much but I feel you should build the characters around the mc more. And also some pov of his enemies or just people in his kingdom and there reactions.

Reading from Alaska

It is a fun read with interesting characters. The only thing is I hope the updates remain stable.

Writing quality- the quality was above average for a fanfic. No major errors and is a quality read. Update stability- I wish it updates more but it's a fanfic authors so my expectations were low. The story development- I like the direction of the story but I hate how weak the mentality and lack of foresight. I know it's suppose the show his growth but there doesn't seem to be a reward for his progress other than gym badges. Every time he goes exploring he almost dies everytime. Some scenarios aso seem forced and the probability of it happening is so low. Character design so far is mid but he left room growth so he might grow on me. World background is solid with some sus parts.

One of the best one piece fan fiction on this site.

The story is a hidden gem. I don’ t know how I haven’t read it until it was finished. The premise of the story didn’t attract me at first but since it was complete I decided to read it and omg it was one of those rare moments where I binge through the whole story without stop. I literally didn’ sleep the whole night. The story was kinda iffy but just made sense somehow and even if he did things I didn’ like I still couldn ’t hate his character. I also learned he did 2 chapters a day for his first fanfic and finished it which would be automatic 5 stars. There was nothing to complain about for grammar but I was to ingrossed in the novel to notice probably.

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