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i feel like when the time comes, sini will help him either put them in their place or kill them
missing content, story is incomplete, ends abruptly and appears that it should continue but is listed as complete, don't waste time on this one
unfinished story, not worth it for anyone to spend money on to read
translation is fine, the author appears to have dementia as they forget their own story, as they tend to change things or just forget about things they write about earlier in the story. It's clear the author is an amateur as they don't appear to keep notes on their own creation.
I have a question, are there extra chapters that are on the discord that aren't here? one of the earlier chapters made it seem like dune had been with may and her Blaziken but there was no chapter where they got frisky, was wondering if the timeskip type chapter to the pokeranch skipped over some chapters that were just on the discord or somewhere else?
ok who is Silas? i feel like I am missing chapters or something, can we get a reminder in the comments here from someone. I feel like it should have been mentioned, but the only people I remember him talking about being angry with are tangas (Dracula kid) and the god of magic who isn't in the mortal realm
You shouldn't write less of them, you should try to include more little by little. As they say practice makes perfect, if you avoid them then it will take that much longer to perfect your ability as a writer to write such characters. loving the story so far, keep up the good work
what is IL player?