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I wanna massage you with both of my handsFeel you up like I've been your manWant you to touch the tip of my glansI wanna be in your bum, yeahIf you don't leave imma comeWant you to suck on my boneYeah, they say it's harder than stonePlease don't make my tip feel aloneSandwich me between your thighs like an OreoDo it evеry night like its a choreoI'm finna sing you to sleep n' call it sterеoGirl, stuff my ass like it's a glory hole, ughWoah
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Huh? Nah its right. Dunno where you saw him eating it recently,.
I find you here and truly understand how stupid you are.
Shallow comedy instance.
True, but clearly worth less than being an Admiral and having more information's than most people.
Pretty much, it was Xilang in the raws tho, better without the "g" anyway
Cough Cough, details
Alright thanks for the feedback I guess? Anyway let me address the main points of your review, 1st of all, it is a Chinese fanfiction...2nd, the betrayal isn't even a betrayal, from what I noticed it has been said from the very beginning that the MC of this Chinese fanfiction's base has always been kinda corrupted, and the plot-driving thingy of this novel is exactly profits, the main character hasn't trained even once in his life, he used the money he gathered with this kind of lifestyle to reach the status of an admiral (money burning system), and exactly for that reason, knowing full well he is going to retire soon, he chooses to just get the most out of it while he still could... So yeah, he was never "loyal" in the first place, in the One Piece world you either are a pirate or you are under the Marines and the world government (let's forget about bounty hunters for now), being a Marine gives you more chances and information with how to plan your course of actions. That's why he's even a Marine. Damn I talk a lot.3rd, what do you even mean with "everything" at least define it a little bit, because from my point of view everything followed exactly a believable course, the Marines know there is someone high enough that is causing problems, but the pirates won't wait for the internal strifles to be settled, they will take advantage of that, and just like Doflamingo had a Vice Admiral inside the Marine organization, others will probably have the same.Anyway, talked too much, thanks for the honest albeit probably biased against Chinese fanfictions opinion. I hope you find a good read.
Because the deal was made between them (Xilan and WB) and suddenly Ace gets freed, Whitebeard will say to Ace something along the lines of "Perhaps they know each other" when Ace tells him it wasn't Xilan that saved him.
He could've I guess, maybe another time who knows.
Welp, let's say its for his image, imagine a Marine Admiral going to the Naval Headquarters without a ship, plus we can take into account that maybe he is bringing some of the Marines in his base with him, although it won't be said in the next chapters.
Cough, I mean no oppai power and no Dragon inside him but ye.. That one, but he also uses moves from Fairy Tail like the roar.
I mean I just left it. It ain't wrong I guess? They are friends and Luffy always thinks about that promise he made to him. Dunno about Shanks, prolly the same tho.
Nop.