John_Whitley

I've always wanted to read an AU of this. it's interesting how it is progressing.

so do I.

maybe I'm being insolent here

should be I calmed my crying heart.

this is one of the best mha fanfics I have read. it has its own UCs and unique background. I can't wait to read more

I don't write many reviews or comments, but I have to for this one. after getting bored reading other stories, I find myself falling back on this one for the fifth or sixth time. it is just that we'll done. so I just want to thank the author for a good story. thank you from an avid reader

one of the best Naruto fanfics, the Mc is interesting and isn't too obsessed with keeping it Canon. and he is not overly aggressive towards praceeved villains.

can someone please edit and fix the names? None at the beginning is right. this would be interesting if it was edited. but as it is, it is just painful to read.

+1

The Mc is great. The only things that get me are horrible grammar and how badly his magic affects his personality. I can't understand wanting power for the future, but he is too emo. Why did he join a guild if he was only going to train and not really interact with the guild?.