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Alright. Thanks for the review! ^^

Thanks for the review~

Thanks for the review! Details about Siegren will be revealed more as the story progresses~ stay tuned :D

Interesting premise with a good writing quality. The pacing is also good, not too fast or slow. The world building is also detailed enough for easier visualization, but what I liked the most were the character interaction. I have only read about 7 chaptere, but kudos to the author for doing a great job. Overall, 10/10. Will come back for more chapters when it’s about 50 or so ^^

Huh. If I was lazy, then maybe an ample amount of authors must be considered “lazy” as well by your standards, since many of us uses all caps to depict shouting. Also, this must not be your genre, considering you don’t know the norm. :D

What are you talking about? In creative writing, using capital letters to write could imply many things; in this case, shouting. I could name numerous novels that use uppercase letters to depict a character raising the volume of their voice. Perhaps you should read more novels. Seems like the spectrum of yours is still quite narrow.

Elaborate on how you reached the conclusion that it’s “awkward”.

Interesting premise with a promising plot. I’m a simple person—when I see the word “genie” I click, since I’m sucker for anything djinn-related. The writing quality of the author is good, with only minimal errors that isn’t distracting. Moreover, the pacing is good as well. Though I was expecting deserts and stuff, I still got hooked despite the western fantasy theme the book took a turn to. Overall a great read. Will be waiting for more chapters.

I’ve read up to 5 chapters and I got to say Shi is an interesting character that hooks one’s attention. My only issue are the long paragraphs that needs breaking, as well as the excessive amount of commas. My suggestion for the author is to use semicolons to divide the sentences, or an em dash. But overall, an interesting read.

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