Xalysian
Decent at one thing, worst at all others. Although, the youth of life will always be within us. Let us prosper in goodwill and glory of our little achievements. I'm Xalysian/Xaly/Xal. I do write.
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And here's the hiatus shall be for a tiny bit. Needed to edit all and bring everything back into the docs so that I can easily find the mentions and whatnots in the previous chapters since I've been forgetful lately. I will try to bring out better written chapters rather than consistent updates with major errors to the plotline and whatnot. Hope you all beautiful readers can understand from reading this chapter or wondering why isn't there any updates lately.
Writing quality: Loved it, I enjoy longer paragraphs detailing the cold and dark atmosphere of the area introduced so far. Story Development: Unique, got me interested for more chapters as I hope that Mors would feel younger again than his current age. Character Design: An actual old MC and not being reincarnated immediately after? I am in, I'm interested to see the old man do some karate. (joke) Updating Stability: Give Author his much needed time and he'll deliver a nice chapter to read. World Background: I like the introduction so far with the state of this Cursed universe. I might give the other book a read one day, hopefully Author won't drop his works.
*dun dun dun* What a start, oooh exciting!
This is awfully cute.
Same!
"And he was meant" right? Just gotta help out with the misspells since I do have them as well haha. Loving it so far, as I don't mind long paragraphs in particular.
Very impressed with this book's start so far, loved how fitting you included the perspective writing that it flows well and rolls off the tongue. Maybe, I should ask you to become my teacher of proofreading, haha! Anyway, I can't wait to see more of the story as it goes on! Keep it up, ya legend! Loved the MC's friend, such a fun character with his exploitative tricks.
Get you a friend like this in gaming.
From the first two chapters I've read currently as of this review, this writing perspective kinda took me a bit to familiarise. I noticed some minor misspells that did stunned me for a bit and required some re-reads to understand them. This can be fixed with a little bit more time put on proofreading the work. Next, the dialogues are splendid as I could feel the tension in MC's voice however, I also noticed some lines that doesn't feel right in my mind. Maybe I'm just bad enough to read the dialogue but regardless. Story so far has been very interesting with the tragedy story involving MC. Character design are pretty good imo and as I said earlier, in two chapters, the world building could be a very interesting bit in the next chapters. I'm down to tune in for more, Author. You're reeled me in.
Author here! As you can already tell from the obvious big change to the book's title name from originally named, Xalysian's Just: Goddesses' Dream to Anthology of the Goddesses' Dream This change will also announce the full release of the entire collection into Webnovel! The full volumes and the brief summary of each parts are in the synopsis for reading. Do check them out and no worries for those who doesn't find revenge as their cup of coffee or tea. Future volumes will not be the same cycle over and over again. Look forward to Volume 2-6 for the better decisions or motives of the MCs of their respective parts. Volume 1 is heavily focused on the revenge concept. Volume 2 is about the horrors of the monsters. Volume 3 is about heroism and self-love. Volume 4 is about envy, inferiority complex and anger issues. Volume 5 is about modern fantasy kingdom settings and lineages. Volume 6 is about fate. Will there be more fantasy stories after the end of Volume 6? Of course, in a different world and book. Will it be a meta? Eh, up to you guys to decide for that future work. Might be a Dark Fantasy with a System, or something new altogether. Peace!
Now that you mentioned it, I did forget to think about their relationship. Well, it's only like a generic childhood friends situation and only worth like 100ish words but I'll include it whenever Kian pondered on his nostalgic moments. Thanks for the read!
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I can't believe I got morbed in literature.
This was a beautiful mystery. Although I was able to guess what happened after the mystery involving the red arrow to find a treasure, the ending still hit me with goosebumps. It was beautiful, makes my heart melt from the two casts' relationship. I'm glad that this mystery has a beautiful ending. I am speechless. Nothing can describe what I felt but beautiful. Thank you for this wonderful book, Author!
I'm liking the plot so far in this revenge story. God, I love revenge type of stories when they are done right! The descriptive narration is decent at best but hey, we gotta start somewhere when it comes to narrative writing! And so far it's going well with the details of the characters' voicelines. I can't wait until the author came back with more and more chapters to come. Give this a read already if you haven't!
Genuine review of my own abilities as an Author of this book. Please read this review after reading some of the chapters of this book. This is a very special book I've written ever since I learned how to read and write in English. A lot was rephrased and redone in the past times I've written the same scenario left and right. But, I believe this will be the official release of my beautiful creation. Why Xalysian's Just? Sorry, I'm narcissistic, short answer. Sorry, I don't really have a good name. Xalysian is relevant in the book so it's kinda embarrassing to own the same name as the object inside. I update slowly, please don't kill me for a single day where I don't upload anything. The parts for this book are: Volume 1, The Tyrant. Volume 2, Wrath of a Crusader. Volume 3, The Legends of the Descendants. Please support me in making this story rise for the stars above. I may update the review with second part of this once all three parts are finished uploaded to here.