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this is just a horrible excuse, first because I didn't see any big difference between a reality and the simulation second because I don't think it would act differently in real life

man, if you didn’t realize it was supposed to be just another tip ok since you can’t stand to receive a tip okay it’s just another story that I won’t read

read savage divinity to see what an extreme realism character looks like all of this was written on google translator for me your character should be looking for ways to get stronger that don't appear in daulo. another tip is not to get too attached to the original story seeks to put other elements in it THAT ARE NOT SUPER CONVENIENT FOR THE PROTAGONIST !!!!!!

why censor my ******* ?????

I don't think the story should be a fanfic. it should be in the same world but it shouldn't be a story that is dragged by another. is the mc should go to get the problems not the other way around making the mc be dragged by the problems or it is something of an ******* or very veteran authors who have already done many levels, but if you do that then you will have to be careful with your intelligence of the opponents of mc my advice and that you put yourself in the position of opponent of the protagonist when the personality tries to find a middle ground more greedy to become more realistic with a real human without much reflection on his actions AFTER THE ACT why do you decide what you are going to do before you do it and it is common sense not to be sorry afterwards and this is good for not creating an undecided and unrealistic character

great then can you let me defend christianity?

or not ... I stopped reading this novel, I don't even remember why I stopped this

this is an imaginary world bro or follow our common sense to make sense and attract readers

thanks thanks for your criticism i won't waste my time with this novel

this mania of the altor to dramatize all the fights and now since when to control your emotions does it evolve? I thought I had to have all the preparation and accumulation of energy for that and how long has it been since the last time it evolved? the height is pushing too hard for her to become stronger

and I feel like you are a 12 year old child who was shocked to find that people may not taste the same as you ... sad no

I thought that with so many bad reviews about racism and cliches in Chinese novels they would improve over time ... although I haven't seen racism in this one, it has a lot of cliche

trash.................................................................I could spend 1 hour saying why this novel is rubbish but I will not lose more of my time with this shit. want to know why this novel is rubbish so read this shit and draw your own conclusions

again perception what is the use of perceiving danger in advance if your body cannot react to it? this is a tip.for me the best would be to divide between agility, strength and perception

you're kind of screwing the **** up for the statistics but that's okay

to increase damage with a bow just with a better bow even though the bow wouldn’t take as much strength

if you're you and an atheist then that's fine but that doesn't give you the right to denigrate a person for their religion ok

you're starting a shack here I just gave my opinion on a part of the novel that I didn't like, and exactly because the other parts of the novel are not realistic it doesn't matter. now you denigrate a religion to attract a specific audience so it becomes something else