Mr_Babbles

it's a phenomenal sci-fi fantasy story, really one of the most unique I've seen ever, the beginning is alright, introduces an incredibly unique mechanic, but mc has the generic "I'm the badass survivor, so follow me or don't and die" but it becomes better and better the more it goes on, only problem is the author is lazy and rarely updates consistently, but you do have 1k chapters to enjoy

but it literally got negated, what?

this is immersion breaking, we don't need a narrator like this, we need more showing, not telling

hp is the worst thing you can have in a fantasy novel

solidification was never mentioned before tho

mage Anderson? when? also I thought there were no mages at the swamp tower

i hope these "sound effects" stop, they don't even make any sense, you say "jump" but then immediately explain that she's lunging, like jump is not a sound effect my guy, neither is bite

don't say "jump" it looks stupid lol

from a reader of hundreds of novels, the least interesting are the ones with female only posses, it tells what kind of author you are

adding health to the system and points of damage is such a terrible idea, what even signifies turning 1 health to 0? a stopped heart? what if electricity reignited that heart, would it just go from 0 back to 1? health points are just terrible to read in novels