The pros: The story is a very pleasant easy read with good writing style. I kept on reading chapters after chapters. The main character is an endearing somewhat impulsive but well intentioned girl. She doesn't act like an all knowing MC, nor does act stupid, it's just right! Also, there are lots of mysteries. Lots of foreshadowing as well that gives the reader a good chance to make a few guess many chapter in advance, some of them will be right! :) Each chapter is very long (like 3 or 4 "standard royal road" chapter, with many different scenes in it), and much action is happening, doesn't feel drawn out, unlike many other stories here on RR and despite chapter size. The cons: There lots of flashback and scene transition that are abrupt and somewhat confusing. Suspension of disbelief. This story will stretch it quite a lot! For example, the story has many unbelievable plot holes, I am not talking about super power and the like, the premise of such story. Instead, for instance, in Oleander - the main city in that story - there are like about 10 to 20 heroes and villains alike and they have been on status quo for quite a while. Neither winning or losing members, despite some super being extremely more powerful than others. The first 3 super fight Hope is in, one side is clearly the winner, but an unexpected lucky twist let the loser escape. Like every single fight. While it might be a staple of superhero stories to have the same actors in many episodes in a row, this is quite hard to believe here. Another example. Heroes do not kill. The story feels strongly about that. Meanwhile the villains are killing like hundreds of civilians per minutes. But that's fine, we can't fault nor terminate them for that hey?

It's a pretty cool story. Has this strange vibe to it. Like Harry Potter mixed with Bloodborne but then somehow even more anime and over the top lol. It's pretty great. It takes a while but it sets off.

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js

why it count?

yeah

cloud blind guy with cane? from enforcer

heri

hero cool