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Jackal_Zirson2mthPublicado por- Jackal_Zirson2mthPublicado por
with an app like wattpad, where i expect at best a 4/10 experience, i am happy to say that this is one of the best fanfiction i have ever read, i am sad to see that you haven't updated in two months. however, you should feel proud of what you have made here. alltogether, I'd say this is a 9/10 experience in fanfiction (i have over 1500 fanfiction favorited/read between all sights) and 7/10 as far as books go. keep it up, you have what a great skill.
- Jackal_Zirson1yrrespondió a TyrantTron335Ch 17 Chapter 16
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ok writing but annoying amount of chapters are just advertisements or dumb questions, the author is pandering to his readers more then developing his story, he also asks questions to his readers for the smallest thing slowing down the story, its obvious this is all just a way for him to get more patreon subs.
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then stop saying it?
This is also an isekai. Yeah, I have said that already for a million times. I know. - Jackal_Zirson2yrComentado por
just... dont
Sleeping Serum - Make a girl fall into a deep sleep state for 1 hour after drinking. 100 Points - Jackal_Zirson2yrPublicado por
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SIMMMMMMMMMMMMMP
"I-i'll see what i can do" Kira - Jackal_Zirson2yrComentado porCh 4 Chapter 4
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"The shadow clone finally ran out of chakra and dispelled itself"
(T/N: Lmao my vocab is dying. Any other word for shadow clone poofing? Dispelling sounds weird.) - Jackal_Zirson2yrComentado por
THIS IS DISCRIMINATION!
Bloody hell/hell - Jackal_Zirson2yrComentado por
this
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The worst possible kind of situation, your really F'ed up this time gojo, this is why you never let the Oppai lead you astray
'Man, what kind of situation did I put myself in?' - Jackal_Zirson2yrComentado porCh 86 CHAPTER 86(Ganesha's Gala)
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...A GAME THEORY
"Yeah, ok. I'm a GOD, if this thing was capable of threatening gods I would have felt it, beings slipping between the lower worlds isn't as uncommon as you'd think, although it's mostly in the sense of being reborn into the wrong world with memories or something like that, I suppose this explains why exelia is so effective on you, you aren't evolved to take it in as well so it might be forcing evolution faster than other adventurers, but that's just a theory." - Jackal_Zirson2yrrespondió a Brokedepressed
its prolly cause hes constantly destroying his body and rebuilding it
Stats(Now level[2]): STR=D DEX=B AGI=B MAG=A END=A - Jackal_Zirson2yrrespondió a Washuru
my biggest worry would be ruining the temper on the swords
Fire: Easiest element, using it to amplify my strikes and accelerate my body by propelling specific points like behind my elbows feels natural. - Jackal_Zirson2yrComentado por
BROOOOO ive been waiting for this introduction for like YEARS atleast thats what it felt like! anyway joking aside, great chapter and i cant wait for the next one!
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