Ook so ... *cough* * cough* I did actally read the whole 622 bundle of chapters in one go... No in one day mind you but more than a week... I just cant seem to think of how many day this story absorbed me... Its something to read really. its a review so if I want to nitpick I'll say that I'm not a fan of the info chapter but even if you just gaze at them at your leisure even if not reading everything it would not impact the grand scheme of the story. I kindly ask for more. Sorry for my HORRIBLE writing.

I thinks there is a problem... I can't scroll further

Its Noah who made her learn violon ? I don't understand its confusing

I take your suggestion but I don't think I have the skill to make such a thing. Like I said I will first make what I can do and go crazy later when I get better and more courageous.

That could be really good to do but... Do I have the ability to do something that big properly ? I do not know but it could be an idea for the future. Thanks for reading :)

I don't ever remember using a Race Changer mod. Cause I was more the type that blows up his PC because of puting 300 Graphics Amelioration, ENB, 4K Texture pack, Weather pack, weapons, armor and quests... I dont like to use Fallout 4 on 3rd person so I never really gone full player model change. I liked it simple with the hair eyes and skin mod oh there was the tatoo mod too.

What I want is a perfected FEV or at least not the Super Mutant failed one. And I will give him as the story goes on, if you read it I gave big hint of change happening (but that not the Cheat still), I'm paving the way cause I won't give it to him for free and I need a reason why he can have it !

Yes, I made it for that reason and so that I can use both the Side Quests side of things while having the liberty to show the Main Quest side. In a bit more "accurate" timeline like."In a day the Sole Survivor crossed the whole country, created factions anew killing man and monster but with his punches" Personnaly in my "RP" in fallout I slepts every one or two quests at the end at least a years passed you know what I mean so, even if not accurate it will appear more logic or so I wish.

I am not an native english speaker so my vocabulaty is limited by what I know sorry. I don't know how to describe him going out of the house.

I can't tell you rn cause I will explain it in a chapter but. His hand was heavily damaged yes, it couldn't fully regenerate cause of being frozen yes, but also something happened cause he got pierced by Kellogg and it pieced the Cryo-chamber (the pod) too making it leak irradiated liquid Cryo cells hampering regen too but giving him something for later. Won't tell more. (Sorry if its not clear)

Something like that the harpoon with a hook ? It what i have in mind.

I will make it a bit of both cause I can't make the story where he is a cheat and falconpunch his way through a horde of behemoth while he is mounting a death claw as his morning jog... (even if that a great idea the deathclaw one like, In fallout 3) But I will make dramas too cause that what life is made of. But the story won't be as complex as a real writer could do so. Just to be clear I write the story as I imagine it. (sometime I dream it even what happen next)The things I will probably mess up is about real things like how to make a microwave, building a car, how a sikness behave, how radiation work or even about human relation cause Fallout Univers people are messed up in their head so I have to work to make something easy to swallow without me having to go to on internet to teach myself how a motor is made of and a bunch of other scientific things. If its hard to understand me its because my mind is a bit messy sorry. have a nice day.

The mods I thought for the story is the likes of : True Storm, Combined Arms , Grasslands, D.E.C.A.Y, Feral Ghoul Expension, M's Abomination, Mutants Menagerie and more like the Gun for Hire mod a mish mash of mods. And for the "cheat" I began hinting things but it will take a bit of time. Thanks for reading a newbie work I do it for my own pleasure but GOD that hard to make a good thing so sorry for the mistake I will make in advance. Have a nice day and thanks for reading it !

Sorry I might be messy in my writting, english isn't my native language and a total beginner so I will make mistake but I will try to make less or at least not make it worse. Can you tell me where its the most confusing please that I change it thanks ! Yes about that ! I had an idea of golden finger a cheat in the form of A perfect or semi perfect FEV I already began thinking how I can try to give him with not so small hints in the chapters... do you think its good or a bigger cheat is needed ? I feel it will break too much the story if its too strong...

I didn't made a synopsis, no more accuratly is I had one done but few people came read my book. (there was and ugly book picture too) so I changed the picture to this cool one and deleted the synopsis with that one and 4500 people came read just after so... IDK why but that worked better than with a real synopsis so yeah. Thanks for trying it anyway ! Have a nice day !

Sofia Wonder.

Mason's again.

The mason's

The hand but the right one. Same things for his bullet wound.

Its 210 years to be precise so yes far less than I wrote here sorry.