Jaghatai_Kahn

9/10 for the smut scene a FANTASTIC nsfw scene! good interactions, nice dialog, and easy to picture scenes my only gripe with it was the ending that focused on the girls' conversation. you built up the scene to that point that once the conversation, you should've switched back for some sort of finish. though I did find their conversation amusing. and the subsequent inner voice dialog of they could have joined in, plus their reaction was PERFECT!

the reason it's a blue outline is because just using white wouldn't make it stand out that well. it's like when a villain is firing a black energy beam, it usually has a white, red, or purple outline that makes it "pop" off the page, making the effect cooler a great example is darksied's omega beams they look white with a red outline to give it depth and make it "feel like" a laser beam, even though it's supposed to be pure red. hope that helps

most likely referring to you being a kid as either kids, cultivator fanatics, or the Chinese (no racism intended there, just stating from what I've seen over the years or reading stories like this) ever suggest introducing cultivation into a story my reasoning on kids' liking cultivation is due to the naivety of kids just getting into cultivation and reading about basically a child's wildest fantasy come to writing like 1. the countless, pointless cultivation levels like "heavenly golden core stage is 20 ranks below true ancient primordial venerated soul stage 301" 2. countless treasures and secret realms for the "hero" to power up 3. learning countless pointless martial art moves that sound power like "soul-destroying dragon kick of endless night" that get learned and never brought up again. 4. "hero" taking on legions of "bad guys" and winning without a scratch. you get the idea, it's like a kid making a world for their O.C (original chararer) and building a world where he can do anything he wants with no repercussions. only real differences are that a kid would most likely get bored after writing 20 or fewer chapters, whereas cultivator writers can write 200 chapters with the oc dropping in level 70 times and suddenly getting a saving grace to take him back to where he started at the beginning. here's a suggestion on a good suggestion for acultivation read: legendary mechanic it's a unique enough read with obvious cultivation elements, but it never feels like that and is a fantastic read I'd suggest to anyone reading this comment.

what is this from?

lemme guess, sauce is redo of a healer?

initial D if I recall correctly

or omnipotent meaning all powerful and omniscient all knowing

caliban is more of a death world (aka a world where humans can barely survive) covered in endless forests with sporadic human settlement set in semi medieval time.

I never understood why they replaced the native inhabitants or made the forigen powers either extremely racist or greedy, capitalist. like this one story where it was basically fallout but over in China. it had a really good story, and the build-up to becoming a nation again after the nuclear apocalypse was really well written. united under one once more. then jump to them, sending an expedition to america and finding its just numerous factions of bandits, raiders, and super mutants who are, get his: 1. extremely greedy to the point of sacrificing all their subordinates to save themselves 2. apparently, all murderers and / or ra**ist (this included the children being like that) 3. VERY racist, they never stopped calling the Chinese "Yellow monkeys" keep stereotyping like this, and the americans will keep stereotyping the Chinese as dog eating cultivators that kill entire families (including the babies of said family) just because the young master of a sect couldn't ra*e the jade beauty in that person's family. like, i loved cultivation novels in the beginning, but just reading the same thing over and over and over was mind-boggling boring. my favorite being tales of demons and gods before the city was destroyed, and the protagonist ended up in a sect (it had a great idea going), which ruined the story for me. up till that point, I could see the cultivation elements in the story, but its take on it was so unique that it didn't feel like a copy-paste, and i LOVED that. but yeah, he joined a sect, and the story lost its charm for me. the only other cultivation story I liked was the manga where the cultivator ended up in a superhero world (can't remember the name, sorry). the comedic story with some sporadic, sad, and serious undertones made it a nice read even though the cultivator just made a normal sect in the manga. WOW, I looked over what I was writing and noticed I trailed off very quickly. oh well, at least you can see my opinion on Chinese novels

I can, so the main CANON timeline starts at 60 million years before the events of 40k in which the war of the c'tan (aka the living energy clouds feeding off star radiation) vs. the old ones. this war was dubbed the war in heaven due to how apocalyptic the devastation to real space and the immaterium. in this war, the c'tan tricked the necrontyr into becoming their slave army by transforming them into metal skeletons while devouring their souls and bodies. the old ones, in turn, created the Eldar and kroks (ancestor to modern 40k orks) to fight for them. this war went on for millions of years until the old ones were basically wiped from existence due to enslavers (immaterium spawned creatures that are anti psyker) the Eldar during the war created their own gods (kaliah mensha khaine, Isha, and chegoragh, to name a few) note: khaines' names translates to khaine, the bloody handed due to khaine, at the time trying to convince his Eldar handler for something (i forgot srry) failing, and subsequently killing him only to get cursed by another to always have his hands drip with fresh blood. ANYWAYS, chegoragh, also know as the Eldar laughing god, convinced (somehow) the c'tan to attack each other due to them "winning" the war. this resulted in the c'tan severely weakening themselves and allowing the silent king (head necron who retained his free will) to lead his people in revolt against the c'tan, winning and shattering the c'tan into shards. where they were locked away to be used as weapons for the necrons (formerly necrontyr) the silent king, having a bright idea, orders the neceons into their tomb cities and applying stasis fields (basically, time stop for an enclosed area) and just wait for the krorks and Eldar to die out in 60 million years (yes, that is the correct time, they were to wake up for 40k) the war had a VERY bad effect on the immaterium, given the fact of a war spanning millions of years and untold quintillions dead in very horrific fashion, made the immaterium really unsafe, only to turn Into the warp fully during the fall of the Eldar empire and the subsequent birth of slaanesh.