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AN_132 months agorespondió a chichi32310She is the main heroine...
- AN_132 months agorespondió a abhishek_korde
my brain hurts jut writing this chapter.
- AN_132 months agorespondió a Chonchonm
nope but in a comma.... having a massive writer's block and burnout... not only that personal life is going through a tough time.... sry folks...
- AN_138 months agorespondió a KuroWashi1903
if need to fix clarity and grammar use Grammarly.... its better than chatgpt, especially free ones...
- AN_132 years agoPublicado por
As of right now the story is too fast with slow update. Amount of dialogues makes it look like a script than a written story. Character is very bland. This fan-fiction is of modern family, but the character intersection feels off. Mc's relationship status changed way too fast, no added description. Needlessly created drama. Actions taking by MC is confusing with no apparent explanation. Time-skips and jumps are frequent making it hard to understand whats going on in the story.
- AN_132 years agorespondió a Anonny_Anonymous
My bad.
Este párrafo ha sido eliminado. - AN_132 years agorespondió a Sameet_Khadka
That happens when you work with a big studio that has a distribution channel. But I don't know the exact ratio. But it heavily favors the big studios
- AN_132 years agorespondió a Snake_Empress
!!?
- AN_132 years agorespondió a KingofPlatter
What? you mean is she part of his record label i.e Feather Columbia Records, then yes.
- AN_132 years agorespondió a shashank_bhatt
Then wait for the future, telling now will become like a spoiler. Better yet, I didn't plan that far ahead. So, far volume 2 has an outline. I have no idea what to write for volume 3 until finish the previous volume.
