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Based off Leo won’t he be gone for years?
Wrong name
Does he not need sleep?
Basilisk
How do these people live with so few items? That was 3 floors and 12 apartments!
Couldn’t just back up and close the hatch? Let them burn in their own for a bit before going back in?
Yeah, I thought hunters would get paid from monster material
So she can do whatever with lightening and he can only make blades with space? Sounds like he got the raw end of that deal if those blades that cut space are seemingly slower than lightening and not able to cut into the bigger rat zombie from before.
I take it that Lola is somehow going to stumble upon some supernatural stuff and get super powers.
So you are saying that would have worked for hiding it in the first place…
Can he teleport? How did he get back without anyone noticing or tracking him?
2 seconds is actually fairly long, she would see him disappear without any issue
Poor grandma is a footnote.
Well that’s obviously going to come back to bite him
Hey! Author here and I thought I'd give myself a glowing review. Figure if I can't believe in myself then why would any of my readers. Hope you all enjoy the book. Also, please leave a review of what you think and how I could make it better, my writing style means that although I have a plot in mind sometimes it goes off the rails. Thanks for reading!
Seriously? No thoughts of using seals? That’s like the cheat codes of the Narutoverse
I think you need him to face challenges. By the time he met Ruby he was already the most powerful person on the planet. I think you should keep the power level of summoned characters and Juan to that of the world he is in. Don’t give him Dragon Ball levels of power in RWBY.
I made it through chapter 7 and had to stop. One of those chapters was filled with the thought of the MC as he described a pretty girl fighting. That was the entire chapter. Not once did the thought of using his ability help her cross his mind until he was personally in danger. Even then, he was angry for the being 50 levels above him daring to try to hurt him. This was all after he talked about cliche MCs being all cocky and arrogant for no reason. If you don’t like the cliche MC being arrogant immediately after receiving his cheat then you will not like this.