Daoist_YAMI_MAHOU

another trash......on webnovel

problems with. flow.....grammer issues.....néeds an editor..,..#_#

quit!

needs an editor. writing quality is meh meh........

unrealistic .!!!adapting so fast....need better execution....

the interactions lacks depth....

just a wish fulfillment,....,....niydo6routr6oro6dyiodi66dyd6odo6do6ddkdskysodkydykdskyskydskydkdludlydkddludldkudlfludkflfkdiysidisuhxngkhngjt

unfortunately , the main character lacks character. The cultivation setting has so much to offer but the mc lacks depth..lacks personality....It becomes more apparent as the story goes on.

a human

i love it...