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    Daoist3692804 days ago
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    Hello, a question you will see was to recommend an idea if it's okay with you and it's like that a story making a mc reborn in the world of rwby like Whitley schnne there you would have a stable start with resources that could make him make a personal company separated from his family's company and creating a reputation of his own reputation while he creates equipment and personal weapons either costumes like iron man or experiment with his aura to imitate the nen of hxh or recreate techniques of worlds like yu yu hakusho another idea I had was that you use as propaganda that Whitley seduces Blake that way you keep her away from Adam and if their relationship becomes public you can make an advertisement about the leader's leader of the hunt going out with the son of the shnne creating an alliance for the future of the fauns in addition to that with that you can go making a harem with the

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    Daoist3692804 days ago
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    Hello, a question you will see was to recommend an idea if it's okay with you and it's like that a story making a mc reborn in the world of rwby like Whitley schnne there you would have a stable start with resources that could make him make a personal company separated from his family's company and creating a reputation of his own reputation while he creates equipment and personal weapons either costumes like iron man or experiment with his aura to imitate the nen of hxh or recreate techniques of worlds like yu yu hakusho another idea I had was that you use as propaganda that Whitley seduces Blake that way you keep her away from Adam and if their relationship becomes public you can make an advertisement about the leader's leader of the hunt going out with the son of the shnne creating an alliance for the future of the fauns in addition to that with that you can go making a harem with the

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    Daoist3692804 days ago
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    Buenas una pregunta esta historia es una traducción o es una historia original por qué de ser la segunda tenía una duda y si en los próximos capítulos haces mención sobre técnicas del mundo de naruto o de fma en si con las técnicas de control de chacra sería útil para crear movimientos personales además de que también podrías sacar métodos de entrenamiento de dragón ball usando el método de roshi o otra opción que puedes sacar seria el manejo de nen que es una energía con mucha versatilidad y lleva a un entrenamiento más personal no sé qué opinas de eso Good question this story is a translation or is it an original story because of being the second I had a doubt and if in the next chapters you mention techniques from the world of Naruto or fma itself with the chakra control techniques it would be useful to create personal movements in addition to the fact that you could also take dragon ball training methods using the roshi method or another option that you can take out would be the handling of nen which is an energy with a lot of versatility and leads to a more personal training I don't know what you think of that

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    Daoist36928019 days ago
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    Buenas una pregunta verás me ha gustado mucho tu historia y quería saber si quiero eras hacer una versión de esta pero con la idea de que la diosa en vez de usar un alma reencarnada como heraldo escoja a alguien de remanat para darle entretenimiento por eso recomiendo a Whitley schnne es un personaje al que no le han dado mucho uso en el canon y cuenta con el factor joven y de apariencia delicada por lo que hay puedes usar de punto de partida a willow y winter junto a penny o que este vaya de visita a vale y encante a la familia rose/xiao-long tú decides si te interesa esta idea como un au para ver si te sirve o no Good, a question, you see, I really liked your story and I wanted to know if I wanted to make a version of this one but with the idea that the goddess instead of using a reincarnated soul as a herald chooses someone from remanat to give her entertainment that's why I recommend Whitley Schnne is a character who has not been given much use in the canon and has the young and delicate-looking factor so there is you can use Willow and Winter as a starting point with Penny or that he goes to visit Vale and enchant the Rose/xiao-long family you decide if you are interested in this idea as an au to see if it serves you or not

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    Daoist36928023 days ago
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    I just want to say that I liked your story and how you have made a version of ben 10 that in itself is always in control of the situation and dominates both the heroes and the villains very op but I was wondering this and if you make a story of a reincarnated like zack Saturday of the secret Saturdays to change the dynamics a little because of ben 10 I have seen some fanfic but of the secret Saturdays are few and they do not enhance zack's ability to see if you can do what you did with this ben and give him a growth that makes it op too

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    Daoist369280a month ago
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    Question will you still make Raynare stay with the sacred gear of Asia because personally I think you should because she gave it more use than the nun also will you still make the mc have a relationship with Akeno?

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    Daoist369280a month ago
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    If you get to rewrite it you could leave things like Raynare's balance breaker and put some additional elements Ales to the theme of akeno that personally I feel that you could have handled things with her differently giving better development to her character in addition to the fact that she would recommend taking Xenovia as an apprentice so that she will improve her domain of durandal or that you use a method similar to bleach so that she talks with the consciousness inside the sword if it is possible that you think

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    Daoist3692802 months ago
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    One question, if this is a rewrite of the previous version, does it mean that you will make several changes to it because if so, I'm looking forward to it in another note since you made a story giving Oscar the lead role instead of the usual thing, which would be to use Jaune or ruby otaught that in the future you could do a husttia using whitley to see how you get on developing the skills of the youngest of the schnne otthought you could make it more strategic or combine the glyphs with a fighting style that allows him to use a gun and sword like Nero from DMC(Devil May Cry) What do you think of the idea?

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    Daoist3692803 months ago
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    Sabes me estaba preguntando ya que lograste en esta historia que naruto dejara de obsesionarse con sakura por qué no haces que diga algunos amagos hacia ino y hinata incluso a yakumo kurama que siendo honestos tanto en konoha como en varias partes de las naciones elementales hay chicas que están interesadas o que terminan enamorándose del uzumaki pero este siempre está con sus dos grandes obsesiones que lo atan sakura y sasuke irónicamente ellos son las grandes cadenas que lo reprime te tanto emocional como en su potencial por eso te digo que consideres a esas chicas que mencione al principio para comenzar su harem que opinas You know, I was wondering, since you managed to get Naruto to stop obsessing with Sakura in this story, why don't you make him say some threats towards Ino and Hinata, even Yakumo Kurama, who, to be honest, both in Konoha and in various parts of the elemental nations, there are girls who They are interested or end up falling in love with Uzumaki but he is always with his two great obsessions that bind him, Sakura and Sasuke, ironically, they are the great chains that bind him. It represses him both emotionally and in his potential, that's why I tell you to consider those girls that I mentioned at the beginning to start his harem, what do you think?

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    Daoist3692803 months ago
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    Una pregunta esta es una historia original o es una traducción por que si es una historia original tengo algunas sugerencias como por ejemplo aquí podrías hacer que issei no se vuelva demonio si no que se quede como un humano dragón además de que convenza a Irina de que se quede a su lado y no se vuelva un ángel además de que también y digo esto solo como sugerencia agregues a miki hyoundo pero eso lo sugiero por el tema tanto de darle poder para que se cuide como para agregar material H para lemon que opinas One question, is this an original story or is it a translation because if it is an original story I have some suggestions, such as here you could make Issei not become a demon but instead stay as a human dragon in addition to convincing Irina that Stay by his side and don't become an angel. Also, and I say this only as a suggestion, add Miki Hyoundo, but I suggest that because of the issue of both giving him power to take care of himself and adding H material for Lemon, what do you think?