... Wait who first created it? Because I remember Asura using a Rasengan-like move but it wasn't called that at the time.

If I could make a suggestion, can you do duels where the main characters lose themselves to their anger, starting with Yuya's since he has such a lasting impression of how ruthless his duel was.

Please continue this story

She sounds like Azula from avatar

oh ok, smart

Whenever I type my stories, I usually use my phone. Just seems more convenient.

Cause humanity sucks right?

use Grammarly, it helps with correcting your spelling. Sometimes, not all the time. you would also need to change it yourself into what you want it.

why not just use flying raijin

I looked it up, and I found out what it is. *Spoiler* I had already planned something like that, I just didn't know it was an actual skill, so think you for telling me.

I don't know what that is. Please explain in a way, anyone could understand

...I know I shouldn't, but I couldn't help but love the idea too, except less euphoric, more joker like laughing.

Good old sadism at its finest. And I love it!

Think of it like this, the spirit form is becoming magic, I think, so it is hard for her to notice a change. But with Presence concealment, which to me is using magic to make yourself hard to notice, is useless against her, because she can just sense it either by smell or focusing on sensing the magic, though she has to really concentrate.

Also, it is only for the spirit form thing. Stuff-like presence concealment she can find out easily. I see it as a different thing from spirit form and is actual magic being used, so she can pretty much find them easily. She is the arcane dragon, so she can smell magic, so presence concealment can be bypassed easily

It's actually was something I would say in exchange for the version without the 's'.

To be perfectly honest, I wasn't exactly sure what I was thinking when I first wrote that part in. I was too focused on the history, that I didn't take into account the consequences. This was the first story, I wrote.

in terms of speed, Obito is second to Minato, if you don't count Kakashi, because of his Kekkai Genkai. Also, he can pop out of nowhere and attack, which makes him even more dangerous. My character is OP, but even the most OP characters can still be blind-sided, depending on the skill set.

Obito is can be sneaky and is incredibly fast. Indura and Ashura weren't at his level of combat, in chakra and ninjutsu they surpass him, but not in actual ninja combat. That and I needed a reason for the Sharingan and Byakugan.

But it gives him the same, 'not a good guy but also not a bad guy' kind of feel that Kirei has if you watch him in unlimited blade works for the first time.