BrazilNobAutor

My time is valuable, I'm not going to waste my time going back and looking for people or something to correct my chapter every time I write something to pass the time. About the interaction about Sakumo... it's true, I didn't know how to demonstrate his personality since it's something that doesn't "exist" But now I know how to do it and it will improve. Happy reading bye bye.

Warning has already been given about grammar in the novel's synopsis. As I tell everyone, it won't be any different for you. If it bothers you so much, give me your contact details and I'll send you the chapter and you can fix it for me, ok?

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No. The Light element is the highest level ninjutsu derived from Yang. However, it is not the same as Yang. Just as the Dark Element is a derivative of the highest level of the Yin element. They are both used by Naruto Uzumaki healing might guy and the priestess Shion.

Fixed now haha.

Light is Light, yang is yang.

Fixed up.

Fixed up.

very long paragraphs. tiring and boring to read.

Ok