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Syahrul_Azhar1yrComentado porCh 299 Chapter 268: Descending Thunder- Syahrul_Azhar1yrComentado porCh 296 Chapter 295: System Transfer
- Syahrul_Azhar2yrrespondió a hikari_shirou
yeah its the same
"...Heavenly emperor? Who somehow got reincarnated because of a divine tool. Lived for thousands of years during your past life and stood at that world apex only to die because of the betrayal of your past wife and friend." The golden-haired girl said uninterestedly with her red eyes glowing slightly while gazing at the man before her. - Syahrul_Azhar2yrComentado por
timeskip to the beginning of kratos vengance i wanna see the changes you made on his story
But after that is done do tell should I do a Timeskip to Kratos timeline or steadily build it up. - Syahrul_Azhar2yrrespondió a Lethal_Drinker
its still fanfic, you still can stretched it a little bit more well.. its your fanfic and youre the writer so do what you what you think is best hestia still can visit tho?
— "You liar! You said you wouldn't leave me behind!!?!", Hestia raised her voice which caused Hades to stop but he did not look back because he knew that if he did, he couldn't recover his resolve. - Syahrul_Azhar2yrrespondió a GnomeBob
hey are you in stargatesg1 fb fanpage, cause your nickname sound familiar
"If I was going full Batman I would have put a tracker on her and to learn everything about the Avengers, hacked into their systems before developing specific takedowns based on their individual and team weaknesses" I pointed out "Did you leave me any beer or finished them already?" - Syahrul_Azhar2yrrespondió a
but the author write it like hes getting every data in the world
"If I was going full Batman I would have put a tracker on her and to learn everything about the Avengers, hacked into their systems before developing specific takedowns based on their individual and team weaknesses" I pointed out "Did you leave me any beer or finished them already?" - Syahrul_Azhar2yrComentado porCh 21 Duel of Fates (486 AD)
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kinda irk me if she lost the fight with merlin, it said the mc have 'silver blood' wich is stronger than 'golden blood'(olympians who people believed to be [gods], and she livedfor what? millenium? she shoul be able to overcome/override merlins hold over time stone
Ch 20 Mordred (486 AD) - Syahrul_Azhar2yrComentado porEste capítulo ha sido eliminado.
- Syahrul_Azhar2yrrespondió a Purpl
dude! i honestly alredy forgot what fanfic im commenting about i have to read it again so i know what you talking about. but no offense, not stupid doesnt make you suddenly a murderer if i recall naruto just slaughter those bandits without through investigation if the author made a scene that tells the bandits is complete scum not (nothaveachoise) bandits naruto's action will be acceptable and if its an SI story it would made sense too it gave a bad impression alright, the personality change like it came out of no where
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not Vodka?
"I am just going to go drink a glass of whiskey, in case you are going to reveal something that could give me a heart attack, like if you were Gandhi." - Syahrul_Azhar2yrrespondió a GOD_OF_ENAS
sauce?
Este párrafo ha sido eliminado. - Syahrul_Azhar2yrrespondió a shadowstriker102Ch 25 ch.25
- Syahrul_Azhar2yrComentado porCh 47 Chapter 46: His eyes were green.