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I know some don’t like it, but I can’t ignore the vast majority for the minority unfortunately. They’re also majorly important for the development of side-characters. The momentum should also be consistent considering structure has never changed. It’s been like this since the start, I just added a few extra chapters of slice of life. If you take the entire novel, and comb through all the slice of life chapters, it’s below 5%
The structure of the novel is like this; —Main Arc, serious —Arc end, comedy slice of life. Each main arc lasts about 50 chapter, and in between there’s hardly any jokes and the tone is serious. After each arc ends, I dedicate a few chapters for slice of life. In this case, a LOT of people were criticising the novel for lack of slice of life. Hence, I added a bit more. Nonetheless, there’s never slice of life or comedy in major arcs. If you don’t like slice-of-life or comedy, you can skip to the start of each arc. Sadly, the majority feel like they need this (basically 90% after discord poll with 120+ over 9 asking for this) This will be a recurring theme, so I’m just warning in advance. Just skip to start of each arc if you can’t bear it. The slice of life will never take more than 3-5 chapters.
His personality won't change much after he loses his memories. Only in the arc where he loses his memories his personality will change, but only then because he isn't exactly the same.
He of course controls his emotions. You keep mentioning guilty, but I don’t really understand what sort of relevance it has to the story. He felt guilty but… that’s it. He didn’t let the guilt dictate his actions, or what he’s supposed to do. He still went along with the original plan. If anything, right now, he should be interacting more than before when there were hardly any interactions with the characters. I remember avoiding purposely any interactions at the start, but a year has almost passed. In a year, with all the experiences he’s gone through, remaining the same is impossible.
They don’t want him to forget about the past, they just don’t want the past to be the only thing he thinks about. People need to learn to move on, to not be shackled by the past and let it dictate their lives, making them robotic in that sense. The MC retaining the same personality in spite of everything that is happening is what they feel is forced, which sort of makes sense. Guilt, is also okay to feel. I don’t necessarily understand this part. Why is it not okay for him to not feel guilty? He’s always acted indifferent but never was indifferent. The indifference was an act to protect himsel.
Regarding this, his character is the same. He never openly displays his tension or emotions, and in this situation, the reason it occurred is because of who appeared. But honestly, this is a breath of fresh air. I'm usually getting hounded for people telling me the exact opposite of what you're saying, calling MC a Robot and that he hardly has character development and is always indifferent and that he's too distant with others. I've gotten a lot, and i mean a LOT of these comments and its quite fun seeing something that says the opposite haha.
I see, thank you for the feedback, but funnily enough, most of the criticism the novel receives is for the opposite situation. They believe the three calamities are far too irrelevant to the story in the first 300 chapters, which is true. Ive been purposely neglecting them for a specific reason, which is mainly to do with Julien's character. --> Regarding this situation, its kind of weird you find it odd that Julien looks at someone. He is indeed indifferent, but that's not his real personality. It's how he acts based on the 'act' he needs to mantain. --> Julien at the start is fundamentally broken, in short a robot. He's purposely lifeless to some extent, and the more he learns about emotions the less of a 'robot' he is. He is actually becoming a character with depth instead of a robot, which is the goal.
Can you clarify this, please? I've never heard of such comment before.
Wi-Fi is very bad. I can barely log in… so I’m trying to figure that out.
You’ll understand later. This wasn’t really a mental attack.