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Entrail_JI

Entrail_JI

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2019-07-14 Se unióItaly
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  • Entrail_JI
    Entrail_JI15 hours ago
    respondió a VOID73848

    I know some don’t like it, but I can’t ignore the vast majority for the minority unfortunately. They’re also majorly important for the development of side-characters. The momentum should also be consistent considering structure has never changed. It’s been like this since the start, I just added a few extra chapters of slice of life. If you take the entire novel, and comb through all the slice of life chapters, it’s below 5%

  • Entrail_JI
    Entrail_JIa day ago
    respondió a VOID73848

    The structure of the novel is like this; —Main Arc, serious —Arc end, comedy slice of life. Each main arc lasts about 50 chapter, and in between there’s hardly any jokes and the tone is serious. After each arc ends, I dedicate a few chapters for slice of life. In this case, a LOT of people were criticising the novel for lack of slice of life. Hence, I added a bit more. Nonetheless, there’s never slice of life or comedy in major arcs. If you don’t like slice-of-life or comedy, you can skip to the start of each arc. Sadly, the majority feel like they need this (basically 90% after discord poll with 120+ over 9 asking for this) This will be a recurring theme, so I’m just warning in advance. Just skip to start of each arc if you can’t bear it. The slice of life will never take more than 3-5 chapters.

  • Entrail_JI
    Entrail_JIa day ago
    respondió a MAZINO_NA

    His personality won't change much after he loses his memories. Only in the arc where he loses his memories his personality will change, but only then because he isn't exactly the same.

  • Entrail_JI
    Entrail_JI2 days ago
    respondió a MAZINO_NA

    He of course controls his emotions. You keep mentioning guilty, but I don’t really understand what sort of relevance it has to the story. He felt guilty but… that’s it. He didn’t let the guilt dictate his actions, or what he’s supposed to do. He still went along with the original plan. If anything, right now, he should be interacting more than before when there were hardly any interactions with the characters. I remember avoiding purposely any interactions at the start, but a year has almost passed. In a year, with all the experiences he’s gone through, remaining the same is impossible.

  • Entrail_JI
    Entrail_JI2 days ago
    respondió a MAZINO_NA

    They don’t want him to forget about the past, they just don’t want the past to be the only thing he thinks about. People need to learn to move on, to not be shackled by the past and let it dictate their lives, making them robotic in that sense. The MC retaining the same personality in spite of everything that is happening is what they feel is forced, which sort of makes sense. Guilt, is also okay to feel. I don’t necessarily understand this part. Why is it not okay for him to not feel guilty? He’s always acted indifferent but never was indifferent. The indifference was an act to protect himsel.

  • Entrail_JI
    Entrail_JI2 days ago
    respondió a MAZINO_NA

    Regarding this, his character is the same. He never openly displays his tension or emotions, and in this situation, the reason it occurred is because of who appeared. But honestly, this is a breath of fresh air. I'm usually getting hounded for people telling me the exact opposite of what you're saying, calling MC a Robot and that he hardly has character development and is always indifferent and that he's too distant with others. I've gotten a lot, and i mean a LOT of these comments and its quite fun seeing something that says the opposite haha.

  • Entrail_JI
    Entrail_JI2 days ago
    respondió a MAZINO_NA

    I see, thank you for the feedback, but funnily enough, most of the criticism the novel receives is for the opposite situation. They believe the three calamities are far too irrelevant to the story in the first 300 chapters, which is true. Ive been purposely neglecting them for a specific reason, which is mainly to do with Julien's character. --> Regarding this situation, its kind of weird you find it odd that Julien looks at someone. He is indeed indifferent, but that's not his real personality. It's how he acts based on the 'act' he needs to mantain. --> Julien at the start is fundamentally broken, in short a robot. He's purposely lifeless to some extent, and the more he learns about emotions the less of a 'robot' he is. He is actually becoming a character with depth instead of a robot, which is the goal.

  • Entrail_JI
    Entrail_JI3 days ago
    respondió a MAZINO_NA

    Can you clarify this, please? I've never heard of such comment before.

  • Entrail_JI
    Entrail_JI9 days ago
    respondió a Black_salt_pudding

    Wi-Fi is very bad. I can barely log in… so I’m trying to figure that out.

  • Entrail_JI
    Entrail_JI11 days ago
    respondió a Zyad137

    You’ll understand later. This wasn’t really a mental attack.

The Author's POV

The person whom the world revolves around. The person who defeats all of his opponents, and ultimately gets the beautiful girl. The sole existence all villains fear. That is the protagonist. What about me? As a failed author who had only one success throughout his whole career, I had reincarnated into my late novel. "This is it" I thought, as I tightly clenched my fist. Did I just get reincarnated in my own novel? Is this where I reincarnate in a novel and become the protagonist? No. Sadly it's not that kind of novel, as I reincarnated as a mob. The world doesn't revolve around me. The girls don't come flocking towards me. The cheat items don't come to me. "Phew" I let out a sigh of relief. "Thank god I'm not the protagonist" I joyfully shouted as tears streamed down my cheeks. Wait, are you curious as to why I don't want to be the protagonist? I did forget to mention the most important thing when I was describing a protagonist. That is... They are calamity magnets. I just died. If I learned something from that, it's that it really isn't a pleasant experience. If possible let me live a long stable life. Thank you, whoever reincarnated me. I would later come to regret these words... ======== Reader Disclaimer : Please read the *Read before reading novel* in synopsis. ======== Credit to _oinkchan for helping me find the previous novel cover Credit to Rengoku for his amazing edit of the new cover. ======== Discord : https://discord.gg/FNAKgfyky4 Patreon : https://www.patreon.com/TheAuthorPOV

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