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Teeny03177mthComentado porHonestly, I don't like the yelling in her head part. I mean, I feel like it just belittled the situation. Can't it be that she enhances stuff with her touch or by just concentrating?
Fu Shinan screamed crazily in her heart.- Teeny03177mthComentado por
Sure, now she's determined. After 90 percent of the people there died.
As she watched the others desperately holding the door, Fu Shinan felt a surge of determination in her heart. Since fate had given her this extraordinary system, she believed she could withstand it! Even if it required her full effort, she would save these people. She refused to believe that fate would deny them a way out! - Teeny03177mthComentado por
Seriously? She could have been strengthening the base this entire time.
Fu Shinan then remembered her own strengthening system. She had been waiting for the rain to stop for the past few days. Everything was so messy that she had forgotten about the system. She quickly pressed down on the iron plate. - Teeny03177mthrespondió a Kimaylia_Henriques_4694
for real lmao
Fu Shinan, on the other hand, was fearless. Perhaps due to experiencing the apocalypse once, her acceptance of the zombies was significantly stronger than others. If there was any discomfort, it was only feeling nauseous. - Teeny03177mthComentado por
First person to react normally to the end of the world as they know it. I'm a little sad she's clearly going to become an issue.
Bai Lianhua sobbed and threw herself into Ji Zan's arms. "Brother Ji, when I arrived, Auntie was already…Why was this happening? What was going on? What's wrong with this world?" - Teeny03177mthComentado por
Also, they all seem to be adapting far too quickly....
Ji Zan admired her intelligence. That's right, this was just the beginning. Soon, greater difficulties would arise, such as the lack of water, electricity, and food, as well as the constant threat of zombies. In such a world, being a hero was not enough; teamwork was essential for survival. Fu Shinan, who knew medicine, was undoubtedly a good partner. It was impossible for a team to not have a doctor. - Teeny03177mthComentado por
Why does the name keep changing? lol This novel has some good bones I feel like, but please find an editor. 🙏 Also, if you're going to put medical details in, please do the research or just skim those details (I do very much like your novel, though, so please don't take my comment the wrong way).
Ji Zan admired her intelligence. That's right, this was just the beginning. Soon, greater difficulties would arise, such as the lack of water, electricity, and food, as well as the constant threat of zombies. In such a world, being a hero was not enough; teamwork was essential for survival. Fu Shinan, who knew medicine, was undoubtedly a good partner. It was impossible for a team to not have a doctor. - Teeny03171yrComentado por
Didn't it succeed in the last life?
In a while, she would not be able to laugh anymore. She was really full of herself trying to scheme in front of Gu Qingchen! - Teeny03171yrComentado por
if she would only stop saying "superpower" though
She still needed to test it a few more times to see how the superpower could be used. However, it was better for her to use it as little as possible, because every time she used it, she would feel a headache. Maybe she had just started to have a superpower, and she was still not used to it. - Teeny03171yrrespondió a CailinMatthews
agreed
How in the world they were supposed to make her lower her guard if those soldiers kept on being on guard against her? - Teeny03171yrPublicado por
So, this is my second time reading this novel and I adore it. 😊 I felt that it kind of dragged a bit towards the end and I wish we saw the MC go through more as it started to fall flat. Buuttt. It is still a truly well written novel with good translation. And I absolutely love the ML for always being there for the MC.