FairyGoddess

Just like a movie scene

Writing Quality: 4/5 It was not bad, better than a lot I seen on here. Keep up with the good grammar. Although the dialogue and descriptions are balanced, it could be better. Updating Stability: 5/5 I give that to everyone Story Development: 4/5 Good plot, although it is more balanced betwen descriptions and dialogues, it could be better. I did enjoyed the storyline and pacing. Character Design: 4/5 Not bad, I don't have much to say though. World Background: 5/5 Extremely detailed, doesn't live anything out on how the world is. Keep up the good work!

Pick up this book and read it. It's very good. Fair grammar, some mistakes but understandable. I really like the MC. He's got a good character. I hope the author doesn't make any crazy tweak on him. Good dialogues. Well done author.

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