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saske_uchi4 months agoPublicado porThe story would have been better if it wasn't constant face slapping . I could only take the first 30 chapters and was fed up with the side characters.
- saske_uchi5 months agoComentado por
what the heck is a four legged snake [img=disgusted]
- saske_uchi6 months agoPublicado por
The concept is good but the story building is not interesting. It is not an indulging story where every part becomes exciting.
- saske_uchia year agoPublicado por
Novel is quite good but the updates are very rare.
- saske_uchia year agoPublicado por
I read around 10 chapters. The character and story development is not well written there's a lot of scope for improvement. the genre shows its comedy but there wasn't anything of such.
- saske_uchi2 years agorespondió a saske_uchi
change cover picture
- saske_uchi2 years agoPublicado por
Hey Author. i have been reading/following this novel from the start. Thank you for the great novel and timely updates. change the cover to the previous one as this one doesn't look good
- saske_uchi2 years agoComentado por
Great chapter. can you release 2-3 chapters a day.
- saske_uchi2 years agorespondió a Prohane_Oulak
pay coins
- saske_uchi3 years agoPublicado por
If you don't mind I would suggest you to change the name of MC. It's been hectic reading an Indian name as we have been reading lots of Chinese or short English names.. It's just relating or i would say immersing into novel with that name is making it hard with that name It's a very small work it would be great if you can make it happen. Do work on changing Chapter one grammar a bit, try using grammerly. All the best for the novel.
