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alright thank you I will definitely improve on plot

great great quality and for free as well it's unexpected because most authors don't do that the story caught my attention in a way that most don't it was unique and new I can see myself reading more of it

this is my bread and butter when It it comes to novels these are the ones I read most. writing quality and character build are both amazing. keep it up author

positively amazing novel it is growing more and more with every chapter it keeps me pulled in and makes me want more. fantastic job authors keep it up

will get to you soon. thank you for review

let me get home and I will review yours

thank you so much lol I wrote it at work so I'll revise it at home

can you re read the two prologues to see if it helped

a masterpiece through and through. taking your advice on my novel being to fast paced and rushed I'll be adding a prologue. but your book is amazing and has helped me with some pacing issues. keep it up authors

first of this book reminds me of a webtoon that I loved from the character to the new school. it makes me want to root on the character and stay with the book. keep it up