Superdee

sooo....one issue dude has Simi super human strength and goon number 1 2 3 and 4 beat him up that bad when he laid out those other 2 thugs in a second...... a little forced on the plot I still like the book and if froozky has any hand in this he a dead man for the intentional delay.

she is obsessed and made that her toy found someone else

rival? lol your a spec of dust girl lol

np liking the story a lot good character development the world building is A little lacking you keep throwing out city names with no correlation where they are or the distance between.

you have used the word pursued a couple times in a weird way..... pursued (of a person or way) continue or proceed along (a path or route). "the road pursued a straight course over the scrubland" I think you were looking for as the day continued or carried on or passed

I thought his fireball was poison fire now?