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JSirMixalotL3drespondió a grimscarlet153it's like going back in time to the 2nd world war and moving from argentine to berlin while saying it would be bad luck if he would get affected
If he gets involved in the battle between them, At that point, he can only blame himself for being unlucky.- JSirMixalotL20dComentado por
Luck has nothin to do with that. Instead of going there for a weekend or check the enlistened students online he just went all in and moved there
If he gets involved in the battle between them, At that point, he can only blame himself for being unlucky. - JSirMixalotL23dComentado porCh 285 Chapter 285 - Orochimaru: Path from Light to Dark
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Kakashi said Naruto (after graduating) has 4 times his chakra and with Kurama (loose seal) more than 100 times
HP: 4130. CP: 10755 - JSirMixalotL1mthrespondió a DouLewZell_0106
Yeah he confuses quite a few names
Add to that Obito, who graduated a long time ago. These few people already include most of Konoha's main future forces. - JSirMixalotL1mthComentado por
What kind of breakthrough is that? His chakra is tailed beast level and he knows more ninjutsu than Hiruzen. He was only lacking experience from the start and he didn't get any
After all, it was the result of relentless training for over two months, entirely different from any rewards provided by the system. Although the next breakthrough was still a long way off, Asahi now had some confidence. - JSirMixalotL1mthComentado por[A/N: Yes it's probably similiar to what you are thinking. Get Over Here!]
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I would advise you to think about a different intro. Every chapter starts the same way and invites the reader to skip the first 2- paragraphs
At the edge of the pit full of water sat a person who looked around twelve, his brown light brown hair soaked with sweat and his hazel eyes full of focus. - JSirMixalotL3mthPublicado por
I only read till chapter 34 so maybe it gets better later. To his first quest (around chapter 20) you could easily fit everything in 3 chapters. Introduction, joining the chat group, girls fawning over him and him blushing from every interaction with a girl. After getting the first quest you can add lemons and him acting like the MC of the original work. I hoped it would get interesting with the world travel but so far it doesn't and i can't keep reading the same shit every chapter
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Since he wants to marry every beautiful girl he sees or hears about he actually is...
"Don't worry. I won't. I know what sort of person you are. You're not someone who only thinks with his dick. The fact that you won't buy that skill that'd let you control your sperm fertility is all the proof I need. You'd only have sex with the girl you'd want to marry, and that is one of the reason why I fell even more for you." - JSirMixalotL3mthPublicado por
It started pretty good but when he started his music it got way too much focus and the story seemed to stagnate. It got too boring for me personally but maybe other people like 3 chapters with 80% song lyrics in it. If you ignore the music part it is a decent story with little flaws that can easily be improved upon
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Both could be DxD characters. I really like Ingvild but don't know much about Glenda besides her "raising" Lavinia Reni.
Hopefully she can get the Demon Lord to spare her friend, she can save herself, but Ingvild is far too innocent for this cruel world, no matter what her race is. - JSirMixalotL4mthrespondió a Ab_Maxz
So a Sharingan can see through most attacks, even from Kage level but can't see ANYONE (who knows this "jutsu") "moving fast and leaving a log behind they have to pickup/unseal". Really picky eyes...
[A/N:I took this explanation from Reddit or somewhere. Credit to him to have explained it so well. Before starting this fic, I thought substitution jutsu was a space-time jutsu. I blame the other fanfics for depicting it as such] - JSirMixalotL4mthrespondió a
Exactly, they are the elite because you can't outrun their perception. Thank you for making my point
[A/N:I took this explanation from Reddit or somewhere. Credit to him to have explained it so well. Before starting this fic, I thought substitution jutsu was a space-time jutsu. I blame the other fanfics for depicting it as such] - JSirMixalotL4mthComentado por
I think in canon je didn't have one at this point. Just the unique skill Sloth.
So that's one of the Primordial Angels according to Ramiris. One with an Ultimate Skill as well. - JSirMixalotL4mthComentado por
i am too lazy to check but i think i read that's impossible to bring people to other worlds in the aux chapter
The only requirement is that they accept. And the restriction is that I can't assimilate them, when they become cards. Just re-summon them.