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You can also checkout movie "big hero 6" for tech similar to Reed Richards dimension cutting to move objects from one place to another and Nenobots and Baymax. And movie with robot Atom, Robo fighting was really cool in that movie. Also there are lot of tech you can take from DC movies and comics. I once saw a movie in which they make a drug that forces users mind to remember the good memories in there life. Nice thing to remove depression. Don't know the name of movie. There was also a funny movie where a fat man eats a drug to make himself slim and handsome. Those are some old memories and I can't remember the names If you want to go in civilizations, then there are transformers, mechanical angelic races and some in Ben ten.

There is a drug used in movie 'Dredd' which slows the time perception of the world around the user of drug. But it affects the mind so check that out. In movie 'Inception' there was a dream weaver tech that's pretty neat to dig others secret. You can mix it with VR game tech. There is movie 'Lucy' with some what exerted powers of mind. There is Assassin's creed tech to see the DNA memories of ancestors and MC can check the past events without affecting himself.

Well written fanfic.... atleast mc is still sane and not thinking with his ---- Overall it's nice background story mc is powerful but for some reason it seems to lack a goal....he is just surviving and making himself powerful.

It ok bro, i will try...well if you also don't mind me, i also have a little wish...can you try to write a novel about wizarding world.. not just about school but broad magical world of HP. Just set character to a person who recently graduated and exploring various communities of wizards. I am sure it will be a nice project for everyone...you can take some inspiration from fantastic beasts movies...

Just what the hell is going on...he is making things like Island and castle on his first year...even in Chinese fanfics mc play with mud in his first years...just what is this shit.

I like the character very much... although i am bit confused about that vivraniam or something as i didn't played hp game but overall novel is good.

That title brushed memories of a good song.

Ok..the story till now (chapter 18) was good. Bit on the sad theme but not bad... Some points were similar to another hp novel...like one in which Harry's parents were alive and his grandparents died instead....Or he had sister named Rose or something, but in that novel Harry was way too arrogant....well it's just the beginning of 1st year... let's see where story will take us..

Well, there are too many imaginative fantasy in novel. Like hyperspace in the depth of ocean. If ocean depth goes beyond 60km then pressure will be so huge that water will turn into ice aka ICE 6.( Not possible on earth but other planets in space, yes if the planet is completely a water body with strong gravity.)

Well i like author's efforts to even pull this story out...read all the chapters and they were all good...like them very much.... people are constantly complaining that story doesn't follow MCU plot...but why does it need to follow MCU plot...there are literally many parallel worlds in MCU....you can stir the hotch poch as much as you want...mix anything you want....why limit yourself to the plots of movies.....just go for whatever plot....there is phoenix in MCU, in DXD and also in Harry Potter...but who said there can't be various types of phoenix when there are different types of dragons in Harry Potter world...over the top it's fanfic....some times ago i even consider to put Prince of Persia in HP because of sands of times lol...so just enjoy the good fan fic people and stop complaining about plot holes...