Zachary_Brown

Great book! However I think it should be pointed out that Hermione wanted to do the right thing. I’m thinking her and Harry meet up and take the wizard in world by storm(also her and him getting into a relationship after she makes up for her mistakes, Harry also needs to realize that he hasn’t been the best either for not really ever defending her, fuck Ron though). A sort of come to Merlin letting with everyone and good old Dumbnuts being forced to realize how much he fucked up.

I love it. Now personal preference but for me Hermione always should be with Harry. That’s me though. It does seem like she has a crush on him already…. Please have her as Mrs. Potter(yea I begged)

But it’s still great!

The fan fic is good. The problem is the incest. Like seriously. Everything was going great. Over protective brother. Sad sister. Unique powers and building up to be OP. All of a sudden he kisses his sister. It’s just gross. Don’t read if you have morals.

Yea I’m gonna need context here… where does this make you think he enjoys watching his close ones getting railed by someone that is not him? Also no… just no.

This fic is great I just wish there were more chapters!

Exactly! But if you think about it the less the system just gives you the stronger it might be!

Interesting but that is not how this fic will go.

He already died once. Why not get as much benefits as possible in this life. Be open and get all the help he can right?

He’s a part of shield now and her partner. Can’t trust someone with your life if your not open