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Feign_God

Feign_God

Lv13

"So inspiring I went to sleep to pursue my dreams."

2019-04-25 Se unióUnited States
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  • Feign_God
    Feign_God2yr
    Comentado por

    Air?

    We were often told that the reason why a plane could fly was because of Bernoulli's principle, but the truth was no one really could explain why a plane could fly.
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    I Refuse to Become Scumbag in Tokyo
    Cómic · akikan40
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  • Feign_God
    Feign_God2yr
    Comentado por

    huh?

    We were often told that the reason why a plane could fly was because of Bernoulli's principle, but the truth was no one really could explain why a plane could fly.
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    I Refuse to Become Scumbag in Tokyo
    Cómic · akikan40
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  • Feign_God
    Feign_God2yr
    respondió a Rimuru_Tempest_RT
    "Heh? I won't be shy then thanks old man, by the way I'm Mark what's your name?" Mark said.
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    H Mission Commencing!!
    Cómic · Kahel
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  • Feign_God
    Feign_God2yr
    Comentado por
    Rou/Kurome - A bakeneko introduced by Nyanta to MC, she wants MC to be her lifetime companion. Nuke code: 212562
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    H Mission Commencing!!
    Cómic · Kahel
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  • Feign_God
    Feign_God2yr
    Comentado por

    Nuke code?!?!?!! We dropping bombs out here?!

    Tachibana Kyouka - Shiori's ex-coworker in Himawari Cafe, they met again after 20 years in a yoga class. Had a crush to MC. Tachibana Mira's rival(Probably). Nuke code: 203978.
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    H Mission Commencing!!
    Cómic · Kahel
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  • Feign_God
    Feign_God2yr
    respondió a Jeffersom31

    didn't do the squats!!!

    Ever since he arrived in Tokyo, he hadn't missed his workout routine: 100 push-ups, 100 sit-ups, and a 10km jog.
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    Thot hunting System
    Real · IamHazzard
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  • Feign_God
    Feign_God2yr
    respondió a _4_

    No, I'm afraid you've miscalculated, nobody has enough time to finish one piece. You will need a second or 3rd immortal life to get through it all.

    *Sigh* You are so persistent. Even a Yandere's obsession pales in front of you.
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    A Cliché Multiverse story
    Cómic · GloriousMilfHunter
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  • Feign_God
    Feign_God3yr
    respondió a Zeroz7

    Thanks, but he will drink blood, it's just a core of being a vampire that they drink blood. But I do have other concepts of how that will work. I just want to warn you that it will come up, but not excessively.

    Ch 1 'Evil' Cultivators
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    Douluo Dalu - The True Vampire
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  • Feign_God
    Feign_God3yr
    respondió a Zeroz7

    Oscar is also an English-sounding name, in the series. What about him?

    My personal favorite is a story about a short little man; his name is Diego. He wore a bright yellow costume with a red cap and a red eye mask. He would come out when people were in trouble and fought for them when they couldn't. He would get beat up just so others wouldn't have to be.
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    Douluo Dalu - The True Vampire
    Cómic · Feign_God
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  • Feign_God
    Feign_God3yr
    respondió a NebulousArcana

    consider it fixed

    Este párrafo ha sido eliminado.
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    Douluo Dalu - The True Vampire
    Cómic · Feign_God
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  • Feign_God
    Feign_God3yr
    respondió a

    the "little further" part?

    Este párrafo ha sido eliminado.
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    Douluo Dalu - The True Vampire
    Cómic · Feign_God
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  • Feign_God
    Feign_God3yr
    respondió a NebulousArcana

    Ohh the flow obviously has to be slower at the start. A car doesn't start at 100 mph when you start it, does it?

    Ch 1 'Evil' Cultivators
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    Douluo Dalu - The True Vampire
    Cómic · Feign_God
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  • Feign_God
    Feign_God3yr
    respondió a NebulousArcana

    Ohh, there were some repititions, they were there for a purpose, like the "no" The little kid's fantasy shattered as he was hit with cold hard reality, square in the face. and the "no!" A clean-cut single-word response left no room for 'ordinary negotiation'. these 2 draw parallels between the mother and son, showing their similar personalities. Pretty genius, I know. 😁

    Ch 1 'Evil' Cultivators
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    Douluo Dalu - The True Vampire
    Cómic · Feign_God
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  • Feign_God
    Feign_God3yr
    respondió a NebulousArcana

    Nice to know! I'm definitely not that messy with my story. It's just the ideas I come up with can be very questionable sometimes. I know some authors that literally only write when they are high af, using voice to text.

    Ch 1 'Evil' Cultivators
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    Douluo Dalu - The True Vampire
    Cómic · Feign_God
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  • Feign_God
    Feign_God3yr
    respondió a NebulousArcana

    So what did you think of the story other than the grammar and proper English. The chapter was 1245 words. Did it feel short or was it okay length?

    Ch 1 'Evil' Cultivators
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    Douluo Dalu - The True Vampire
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  • Feign_God
    Feign_God3yr
    respondió a NebulousArcana

    So, what does crack-fic mean? Genuinely curious, I was going for something like fanfic you write while high af.

    Ch 1 'Evil' Cultivators
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    Douluo Dalu - The True Vampire
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  • Feign_God
    Feign_God3yr
    Comentado por

    There will be 5 trial chapters, you can decide if you want to read it by then, it will mostly be essential things. I honestly have put no thought into this story, it will mostly be off the top of the dome. I do basic plans for the chapter I write as I write it. You can expect the 5 chapters to be done by the end of the weekend. Umm... what else could I say... The next chapter's title is Spirit Awakening. Thanks for checking this book out.

    Ch 1 'Evil' Cultivators
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    Douluo Dalu - The True Vampire
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  • Feign_God
    Feign_God3yr
    Comentado por

    niceu!

    Ch 23 Chapter 23: Perfect Punching Bag
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    DOULUO DALU 2: Legend Of Zhu Tianmeng
    Cómic · Lockedkid69
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  • Feign_God
    Feign_God3yr
    Comentado por

    If you can't beat'em, join'em!

    "Because I know that I can't be your opponent, I want to become your loyal maid." She added, which makes a weak smile appeared on Yunlong's face.
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    Douluo Dalu: The Legend of Heavenly Ruler
    Cómic · Nine_Clouds
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  • Feign_God
    Feign_God3yr
    Comentado por

    Thanks for the chapters, keep up the great work! I really like the direction it is heading, want more daughter scenes, please.

    Ch 20 Chapter 20: Visitors
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    DOULUO DALU 2: Legend Of Zhu Tianmeng
    Cómic · Lockedkid69
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