don't want to say anything because it will spoil but, it takes time to truly make a true tragedy happen to someone ;)

yep it's all planned out

yep but in my defense, I only ever had the first like 7 chaps and the rest was made as I went along >.< But bear with it, cause now, I actually have a little something that I think is cool after a week of brainstorming and reading/watching different source materials.

boink indeed

I really like the story, the premise, the characters and the start... also, the cover since I play her a lot xd. But overall, I would want to see more, great job author!

I can clearly tell that a lot of thought has been put to this, it's your typical shounen of the mc wanting to be strong, and I look forward to it!

Papc Illar by -artstation.com/georgecata93-

The forged by -artstation.com/spagtittihands-

To start, I really like how the author switched from the two perspectives. I really liked how they interact with each other and how the author makes it very clear for the reader.

SKKKKKKKKKK

lol asserting dominance

feels

philiPPPPPPPPPPNSSSSSSS

omoo makes sense

omo~ sure ><

YES

omooo yeahh

OmO I genuinely liked this, not being able to express your stories is the hardest thing so its commendable that you still went on even though English is not your forte.