Ian_Emrys

I need to know the aftermath of "Harry's death" from James and Lily POV

Please increase the length of the chapters

The chapters are too short

Just take a break and then continue otherwise the quality will drop

I just want to point out that you are making characters more like robotic to follow fate like seriously they want to say something but instead say other to follow fate's plan.

You should have atleast 10 chapters posted before asking for money....................................................................................................................

Galacta i have only senn her in one or two fics

After a long time

Kenjutsu is Sword skill while Kinjutsu is Forbidden skill